| Reviews for Heir of Greatness |
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SupernaturalLover65 chapter 19 . 7/22 Absolutely love this! I hope you continue this it's amazing! |
Alicia Janae Alexander chapter 19 . 4/2 I love this book so far I hope you have time to update this book |
Dezman23 chapter 19 . 3/6 I have never read a story that has been worked from this angle. It is a very good read n flows smoothly. Keep up the good work |
julesa66 chapter 19 . 9/5/2019 Please update your story. I really enjoy what you have written so far. What a reality check for Dumbledore. Some people are not safe at home. Love reading about how the founders have been training Harry and made him part of the family. I hope you will up date your story soon. |
Jestrbob chapter 19 . 3/5/2019 Ok a few spelling errors do not ruin a story. Nice concept for a story. The flashback seems to be working well. Please continue. |
BoOmErT.63 chapter 1 . 1/11/2019 most especially DOBBY! |
BoOmErT.63 chapter 19 . 9/13/2018 will you update please? |
APridefulSin chapter 19 . 9/9/2018 wooooooaaaaaahhhhh... a good woah |
Anon19740 chapter 19 . 5/10/2018 Can you please write longer chapters, and to reiterate miss nique's point please put harry with (these are my suggestions) luna, susan, hannah, daphne or tracey |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/4/2018 Love this story please update soon |
miss nique chapter 19 . 3/7/2018 Please don't have Harry with a male. He needs a good girl like Luna or Susan. Let Salazar, Snape, Lupin, and Black get them. Or maybe his parents |
julesa66 chapter 7 . 3/7/2018 I don't think Harry should have any pairings. He doesn't need to have a relationship while he is in school. Why can't he just gave good friend's like with the twins. He really doesn't need to be friends with Ron anymore since he never really was a good friend to ggegin with. Trying to get Harry to slack off on his work, eating everything in sight just a lump and then the bossy, pushy pain in the butt know it all. He needs better friend's not a relationship. |
avidreader-everafter chapter 19 . 3/7/2018 You really are putting harry through the wringer ,though I can't help but wonder how the dursleys will be repaid for their "kindness". Hope to see more from you soon and best of luck. Everafter |
SkyeMoor chapter 10 . 3/7/2018 Okay, the whole "women are nurturing and need people comforting them?" I don't thing Granger's like that. (nor lovegood, even though she's a true space cadet) |
SkyeMoor chapter 7 . 3/7/2018 That second to last paragraph needs rewriting. Try making it sound like people are actually reacting. They're ... both too coherent, and too... directed. "Did he do that to himself?" might also belong there |