Um...
Haru is so mean in this fic...
Yes, a little background might be better? Why is Makoto with Haru if Haru obviously doesn't love him? Where's Rin in all of this?

This is too confusing.

Do you plan on continuing this story, or was it just a one-shot?

What happened to Rin?

Why's Haru with Makoto when he's so obviously in love with Rin?

I haven't read a fic with this kinda approach yet, so I'm intrigued.

Love the angst, love the drama! Such a tense but great little fic. Awesome writing! :)

Wow... I never thought the 'free' Haruka dreamed of as this kind of 'free'. I did not expect that, but surprises are always the BEST. This isn't going to be a one shot, right? I really want to know how this fanfic will end up T_T

Excuse me. I believe you owe my heart a bandaid. This was excellent, though maybe a tad short. And excruciating. Thanks for writing it!

Oh my... What a weird way to be free. Otherwise, I liked this love-triangle-cheating-on-Mako idea. Good job!