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Diavo chapter 22 . 10/16/2019 So, camicazi is a worrying version of tiny tina... i can dig it. |
sabbatis3214 chapter 6 . 8/3/2019 Katanas have several movement that use only one hand but the katana was not use by only samurai family's and most swords of one handed |
ilovejared089 chapter 28 . 1/22/2019 Cami's dragon should be a deadly nadder just like Astrid |
TheLegendaryBlackDragonKnight chapter 6 . 12/15/2018 "That and a Katana cannot be held with one hand" RobsingtonOK... that's a Claymore you're talking about, a Katana can be held with one hand. Seen people do it before and I did write a Fanfic about my Movie Idea before I decided to get rid of it, did not work out too well and every word was capitalized. BTW, the Nightbreaker Sword was a fantastic idea since you can just Hiccup modify it to become a flaming Ninjato P.S: You may know this by now but I've taken the liberty of using the Nightbreaker, because it's ONE WORD like "Heartbroken" in Chapter 26 as a "Dark-Forged Blade that is said to get stronger in the night weather or not there is a moon in the sky" Consider this a reference to this inspiration since it's supposed to be the Sword of Hiccup Horrendous Haddock II, his Grandfather. Oh and there is another sword and it's based off the "Sparda" from Devil May Cry (2001) as if my stories weren't already filled with enough Devil May Cry references and inspirations here and there... And my own take on the Nightbreaker is a Ninjaken, same sword but different name |
Guest chapter 33 . 9/10/2018 At first when I read the 33rd a/n thing I was sad it might not continue but as I read I understood why, I know what it's like to lose someone close and its horrible to say the least besides all of that the story was absolutely amazing problay one of the best I ever read |
TheLegendaryBlackDragonKnight chapter 27 . 8/9/2018 Heartbroken is ONE Word, bro. But I fucking Love that Fox Kit, thanks for having me put her in my KOTDR Trilogy. I've been having complaints saying that Vixen adds and does absolutely NOTHING to the story at all and they want me to get rid of her right now, bastards. She's a cute and adorable little Red Fox and I ain't abolishing her anytime soon. Thanks again though! |
TheLegendaryBlackDragonKnight chapter 1 . 5/10/2018 How the Hell did Valka Die exactly? I await your response |
BelialGamingFF chapter 33 . 3/27/2018 Take your time with getting the next chapters out, I know how it feels to lose both family and friends. Good luck with your career choice also. As for the story, I think breaking paragraphs into smaller paragraphs would improve the story. A few other things would be, watch how you use dialogue as sometimes I got confused on who was talking. A final thing would be to double check grammar, I've noticed multiple spelling and grammatical mistakes every chapter and as I am a stickler for proper grammar it does irk me. Thanks for writing such an amazing story. |
MayaThePupper chapter 21 . 12/5/2017 I'm confused is it just the foot that was amputated or the leg? |
Guest chapter 28 . 10/31/2017 Deadly Nadder or change wing |
Not Important chapter 22 . 4/29/2017 I definitely saw the borderlands reference there. Tiny Tina and Kreig |
BeeeTeee chapter 6 . 3/2/2017 Gah! right after I say it's getting better the first paragraph starts in present tense for no reason and switches to past half way through. pleeeease fix. |
BeeeTeee chapter 5 . 3/2/2017 In the first 4 chapters you had a serious issue with inappropriately changing tenses in the middle of sentences. That can really break immersion when I'm reading so I tend to not read stories with such glaring grammar errors. This chapter was much better in that sense though so I'll keep going since the premise is interesting. |
Prince Fiend chapter 11 . 2/18/2017 Ok now I'm only up to chapter 11, only a third of the way in. But so far it's pretty much just the movie with a little less talking and with no signs of changing, now like I said only chapter 11, but I feel like i could go watch the movie and get the story. |
Guest chapter 33 . 2/16/2017 sorry to heat that |