| Reviews for Square Peg, Round Soul |
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Spej chapter 43 . 7/17 I've probably read this at least 10 times and each time I get to the last posted chapter and in disappointed that it hasn't been updated more. It would be great if you would update it again. |
Scoti chapter 16 . 6/29 Great story. I’m really enjoying it. Very well written |
Hmm chapter 43 . 5/1 Generally enjoyed this. I think your first chapters were amazing and your exploration of meditation was well thought through. I like Bella's relationships with Embry, Quil and Jake. However, over time the speech became very lecture-y, with huge self-righteous caricatured rants from every character. It was very alienating. And there are too many times where Bella becomes a Mary Sue - you can redeem her without making her a universal victim or a hero. I don't like you rewriting chapters from Sam's POV, it's not worth reading as it's currently formed - there is so little new information. I would enjoy seeing his activities from his perspective if these chapters offered more depth into his character or the wolves lives, but in general it reads like a copy-pasted chapter of the previous, with pronouns changed and re structured clichés. That said, I have thoroughly enjoyed your plot. I'm very curious about Bella's relationship to Taha Aki. I am also looking forward to seeing where you take this story further. Thank you for your hard work so far. |
mizzsmilez529 chapter 43 . 4/15 So please tell me you plan on updating sometime in the near future. This is an amazingly awesome beautiful story. The way their relationship has progressed so naturally more then anything and I love the idea of letting the imprint happen slower instead of instant. I hope to be reading another chapter sooon! |
TheWiseQueen chapter 43 . 4/14 This is such a sweet fic, I hope the muse strikes for you again soon! |
debra.joines chapter 43 . 3/30 Please please come back to this story |
Kim chapter 43 . 2/28 Updated please good story |
dizzykaz chapter 43 . 1/24 You need to update please. The story isn’t finished xx |
Rissa129 chapter 43 . 12/8/2019 Upppppdaaaattee! |
B4bidden chapter 41 . 12/4/2019 still absolutely love it hope to read more 1 day soon. |
Sarahn1991 chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 I hope things are going well for you! Your story is lovely and I hope you are able to continue updating. |
Kagz419 chapter 43 . 8/22/2019 Can't wait to read more! |
rose antiquus chapter 43 . 8/19/2019 Love this story, I hope you update one day. |
annawritess chapter 43 . 8/8/2019 I hope you come back to finish this one day! Still by far one of my favorites! |
Outgund chapter 23 . 7/16/2019 Why are quil and embry at Bella's school |