Hello :-)

So first to say thank you for writing this, i really LOVE being erica and miss it (especially dr. Tom.. :-)
So it is very nice to have someone continue writing it.
And i enjoyed reading everything, couldn't stop! hope you will continue writng, so when is 5x10 coming?
The charecters seem to continue coming to life through your stories and the fact that it is written like a screen play makes it even nicer as i can just imagine the scenes.
A few little things i feel to point out, that can maybe help if you continue.. .and please take this in a very good way, as usefull help, and only take whatever advice you feel connected to.

So, first of all, I felt there is a lot of viloance and action... it feels a little different from the original series. even though yes, Adam had a violent past, the series itself is quite relaxed on that level. and here seem to be a lot more hitting, swearing and dead bodies ;-) From different people not just Adam.
I am guessing it is a matter of personal taste.. I am less connected to this sort of action series. What i love about "Being Erica" is that it includes all sides of life, but in general it is not an action series. Deals more with "regular life" if you can call it that, with all the time travel. But i think this is what makes it so magical. It seems like a normal life series, but then... people travvel times and realities.

And another thing is a very personal request.. :-) there was one episode where it looks like Erica is very sick and going to die and dr. Tom comes to say goodbye. I personally would love to see a "happy ending".
I would love to see Erica getting well, or avoiding this sickness altogether, and I DREAM to see Dr. Tom becoming a doctor again, even a higher level dr. And working with Erica, guiding her, like i hoped the actual series would continue... if there was a season 5 and 6 and so on... (which shoul have been if you ask me!)
Kind of coming full circle. And leaving Erica healthy.. to grow older and wiser.. help more people. And with this magic of time travel all is possible, you can go back to that episode where she was sick and turn it all around. Yes this is my personal request, but of course only if you feel it :-)

Thank you again for the lovely writing
Kylie

Awwww. I shipped Kai and Erica so hard. Can't wait for the next episode!

Well that was unexpected. And here I thought Adam had left that life behind.

I see that this is the pre-doctor Kai. Erica is seeing the person he used to be. Who is arrogant, rude, and cocky. She still has feelings for Kai and it coukd possivly qork out. Although their future doesn't hold much promise.