Reviews for Mist
mina tepese chapter 12 . 11/15/2015
Not gonna lie, if I hadn't seen madoka magica already that ending would have made me cry. But I did see it so I'm out of tears to shed. Still a pretty good story though. Not perfect, but still really good.
timothy.nguyen.73 chapter 2 . 11/20/2014
Wow this story so amateurish. I cant begin to describe all the criticism that is flowing in my head right now. Omniscient or not I and a lot of people be freaking terrified and depress entering in the most harsh and boring world of SnK. Why is she fangirling? In the majority of the fanfics, fangirling is a sign that your story is amateurish and poor. Why the he'll is she on trial for? That would Interrogate her in a secret place not on a trial unless the MP caught sight of her. I have to stop there..and one more thing. To fast pacing! 1.6/5rating.
Secret chapter 12 . 7/12/2014
Most touching ending ever I you are an amazing writer
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 12 . 6/30/2014
Wait, is there a sequel yet?
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Lol the suspenseee!
Rivera.Silver.11Creepypastas12 chapter 3 . 6/30/2014
Dun dun dunnnnn! XD
Guest chapter 12 . 4/11/2014
The feels! WHY!
IKhandoZatman chapter 12 . 4/2/2014
That was wonderful.
RadiantMoonField chapter 11 . 1/24/2014
lifyvdslivb ;i what!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/9/2013
XD oh my gosh Homura dawg!
can't wait to see where this is going!
Anon chan chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Just to inform you in the first chapter she already sounds like a mary sue. What kind of person dresses so specially when they're supposed to be stuck at home with no plans? Not one I trust.
Kaioo chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
no sense of tact or subtlety.
SuperSegovia123 chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
I feel like you're starying to much from the main idea of your story. Overrall good story, but there are parts in the story where you're talking about something important and BAM! A wild titan appears. Still, it was really interesting. Keep up the good work.
MikasaSuCasa chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Dude, im LOVING the story so far! Keep up the good work!
orientalpenguine chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
OMFG I just died when I saw godoka I'm so happy you watch meduka meguca aaaaa great story though wish blake would expose gadgets to them though.
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