This book hasn't been updated in 4 years...
I hope the author of this e-book is still awake...

A year and 9 days since it the last update and I'm still waiting on an update.

I'm just discreetly wishing for Lucario to be another Kurama

looove this story!

Okay I read chapter 1 before, but I read about about Ash explain his past and he said his father died in an ambush, I thought until now that Ash's aura training would be a bit serious, but take care of his devastated mother from time to time, but after everything he had to take care of his mother, she died, and Ash had lost both of his parents, which prompt him to become serious of his training and bring peace to his kingdom. Also I should've type this long ago, but Ash's personalty should be a bit more of his anime self, since he acted serious in battle, and a little fun outside of battle. So I clear of what I have to say from long ago since I first read this.

What an amazing chapter! All the wait for this chapter was worth it! I'm sorry you felt so rushed to finish it, personally I'm just glad you continued at all because I love this story. I know how hard it is to write a story with while also keeping up with everything else in life, so cuddos for having both the talent and dedication to continue. Keep up the awesome work, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Nice chapter. I bet the kiss was real. So Fleur and Ash were the ones that were being tricked, right? Or was Fleur in on this as well? I wonder how Twilight and her friends will react when they see the kissing part.

Wow. Nice job

What they did to Ash was a dick move and he should get back at them.

och aye dinna know if aye told yah me lad but aye couldnae be noticing that yon story is missing a few things if yah get me meaning.

I think movie. Since Equestria Girls takes place during season 3 episode 30 through season 4 episode 1 you might as well make Ash and the other six to go inside that mirror

dude it's been over a week

Come on aurabro update the story its probably the best I've ever read so come on and update please or at least tell us if you are leaving the story

Can you please continue the story please and if you do make a war/romance movie for ash please

Please update don't abandon this story its a masterpiece in my eyes I'm begging you in the most deppest way I can don't abandon this story.