*at the end* Wow, that was amazing! Nicely done, Tak, Gabby. I love how you two describe the relationship between these two lovely kids, it's so sweet and a little sad how Thor never seems to notice when Loki is hurting and unhappy, but then it's sweet again when he does realize it and does all he can to help. Great job, guys! Keep writing!

Poor Loki getting teased and mocked every b-day. All he wants is a book and peace and a pretty puddle. Can you not give him that, Warriors three & Co?! I think I may cry... Poor child...

Thanks for the story! :-)

l Like it!.

Aww the end of this story. It's just so cute I can't. I really hope to find a story up ahead where these words are true. Thor protecting Loki coming incredibly close to loosing his life while keeping his brother safe and Loki managing to bring him back from the brink.

I absolutely adore all the forehead touches and kisses.

Sooo, again I don't get something: how it can be that Loki, who in the other of your story took notes about Thor's mistakes, cannot beat noone of Warrior Three and Sif using the same knowledge of their weakness? He is supposed smart one. And my own experience of martial arts taught me that victory at melee provides not by just luck or brute force. And if one are able to think on their feet, they can quite beat physically superior opponent (from one to three people that's it)... Or Loki's any attempt of a strategic approach to hand-in-hand fight is seen as a scam and tricks too?

Aww- even if thor is asleep and didnt heard loki word. Never doubt loki love his brother thor.

Hahaha, good to know their safe. But we never got to see what happened back in the palace when they realized the boys were missing.

KUTGW!

That was a very good amount of luck on their side. Fortunately they'll get to those waters and Loki willbe fine in the end. They'll be grounded after they get back, Hahahaha maybe The Warriors Three and Sif will resent not being invited to such an adventure. XD

Yah, the irony of it. They didn't go to the snakes, instead they've got monsters that will make them into tiny pieces after them, All for a little bit of water XD
How sad XD

Goodness they need to find a way out. Talking about their own situation, I wonder if the Queen and King are already aware that their offspring are out of the palace in some dangerous adventure, as tradition calls them,
Good that they're on their own to talk things out, but is so appalling at the same time. Problems are beginning to get in the way, They're not being careful around each other, not even with what the say,
The harm has been done and Loki can't just forget it like Thor does, The eldest one is so oblivious to the damage they do to the younger prince.
Heartbreaking case...

Their bickering is astounding. I know siblings that don't even have it in them to squabble, and if they it is so rare. These two are just a danger to themselves sometimes... In this chapter I really wanted to smack Thor being like that. And the other companions aren't exactly helping this cause. Bad for them that this will be against them when they get older.

If Loki had lived on Earth he would have declared himself insane after a couples of years by celebrating his birthdate every single year XD
Good to know that they're not going to some outlandish location...Well, everything is not as it seems. This place with magical properties could be dangerous as well.
Aaaw it is so sad that the young prince has to put up with all that mockery. Makes you really want to smack Thor and the rest of them. And to think he has to endure the gossip around him is so exasperating too.
I have no idea why Frigga would insist if she knows Loki doesn't like to be watched like that...

Loved it(: kickass job :D