Nhoooooo! I want to know what happens next! Don't be so cruel. Oh my gosh they should totally kiss than Gray could go like:. What the hell and start being well... Gray around her. XD this is Too much! :D

OMG PLEASEEE UPDATE OR SOMEONE CONTINUE THIS

W-what happens next?

What happened?! Where is the next chapter? Update please! Soon!

Ugh... The story is amazing so far, but I'm sad that you made this chapter so short! Anyways I can't wait for the next update!

Im so curious of what will be happening in next chapter!

well.. she did say every pleasure...

Well! I sincerely hope that Gray will play the gentleman!

Not bad. I admit that I wasn't sure if I would like this when I clicked on it but it's not that bad.

I really liked Gail, will we be seeing her after this now that the silver moon has passed? Oh and I am so excited to see what happens next. But Gray you better bit mess with that angel that way... You know what I mean stripper.

The only real fault that I noticed was that there are spelling errors and unnecessary words peppered throughout the story. It's not really big and it's something that extra look throughs or a beta reader can fix.

Thanks for writing and please update when you are ready!

This seriously reminds me of Heaven's Lost Property.

cool...i'll be waiting for the update

oh my gosh...wasn't entirely expecting that...lol

This seems interesting! Hahah Abs-kun...best nickname lolol

Whats with Mam Gail? Hahaha funny woman! I (maybe) like the story! Since I didnt see Juvia there, I wonder what will she be? :3 Cant wait til more!

it's actually pretty interesting. i hope you get the time to upload soon