| Reviews for Subtle Unraveling |
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RayKR chapter 7 . 5/3 Hi Ms. StormyInk, I cannot put into words how this fic had been writing with great attentive eyes. The story is so well-constructed and it seems that you have managed to capture each character well. It shocked me nonetheless that you've seemed to abandon this fic for 6 years now even though it would have been completed in a few more chapters, as you previously mentioned. I hope that one day you would have the opportunity to finish it since it was so close... |
eve.sura chapter 7 . 2/2 Noooo I can’t believe it! Please, I know it’s been years, but this was such a good story and the fact that it lacks an ending make me cry You HAVE TO update this story! |
Ariana Wyg chapter 7 . 12/24/2019 IT's been six years but I hope you're still writing. I will tell you I really enjoyed this rivamika story. 1st because I read alot of rivamika that were good but none of them actually started with mikasa already is levi's girlfreind hhhhh so I was chocked and happy from the start. I had a feeling you're a creative writer. I finished those 2 chapters and I thought I was right, I loved these things about your story: - you focused on rivamika scenes and didn't bother think about what would be the others reaction or their own relationships.. - you skipped preparing for the mission, the plan, the way till they meet the titans, you just jumped to the point mikasa was in danger and levi helped her. - the conversations are good and emotionel, - I like both writings from mikasa's and levi's perspective. - I loved the scene of mikasa feeding sasha in front of levi and that you made armin and eren in a relationship those two scenes would scare me personally because I'am writing an emotional story but you were brave to add it and it didn't feel strange at all still the story is complete and good and the empathy is there I'am not a writer obviously but I want to be, And I respect your bravery, creativeness, and craziness XD |
River chapter 7 . 12/10/2019 Looking forward to the last two (or three) chapters. I hope you put them up soon. This is amazing. |
Cal chapter 7 . 12/8/2019 I just found this. It's beautiful written. I love the characters and the relationships between them. The action is also written very well/ easy to visualize. I hope you find the time and motivation to pick this back up. It is truly a joy to read. |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/7/2019 Great story. I love the additional characters. |
arch225 chapter 7 . 10/15/2019 Please continue! |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/22/2019 Pls continue pls pls pls |
washecy chapter 7 . 4/17/2018 this is actually an amazing story your writing is beautiful and flawless in every way we’re all waiting for the update! |
Lakshmi chapter 7 . 1/12/2018 Are you seriously abandoning this? |
northern.light64 chapter 2 . 6/30/2017 oh god your writing is marvelous and this is probably the best levi perspective writing (did any of this made sense) ive ever read here |
ObsidianPhantom chapter 2 . 5/10/2017 FUCK! That last part was unexpectedly intense! I was... It was chilling and I had to stop and just breathe for a moment because Levi's past, hell even just his life is a horrifying thing to think about. I felt the urge to hug him there but Levi scares the shit outta me... Lol! |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/3/2017 This is perfect! I love how you portrait the characters! Your Levi is perfect! Your whole story is so well-written! This was one of the best smut scenes xD Seriously, you are talented! I hope you update soon! |
GirlMeetsEvil chapter 6 . 3/31/2017 that went really far... Ahahaha good fanfic though. |
lightstarmaiden chapter 7 . 3/20/2017 Great story so far! Cannot wait to read more! |