| Reviews for Laundry Day |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/26 Loved this |
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 5/15/2017 Great. |
LanceSennin chapter 1 . 9/27/2016 One of the best Clois smuts so far... make more. Love how Lois is so aroused. Please? |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 This was an amazing fic I've never read one that was so truly arousing the way you portrayed the sex and raw passion between the two was incredible! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2015 Pure yumminess! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 nice |
Clarica chapter 1 . 4/7/2014 Great! Simply wild and perfect for them...you know rewatching seson 4 and the way they act at each other, I think your fic fits them and the wild freedom they had in this season...and without any Lana drama limitations your story cloud really have happened...I wish it could...anyway thanks... beautiful scenes...perfect visual writing |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2014 Wow that was the hotest thing I. Have ever read I was now have a mess in my bed I have to clean up thanks |
WellingisGOD chapter 1 . 10/8/2013 Holy whoa I loved this! Hottie Mc Hot-Hot! Love (early) CLOIS...so mm-mm-good! This is awesome! GREAT JOB! |
madcloisfan chapter 1 . 9/28/2013 Loved it |
guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2013 Geez now all I need is a cigarette and a cold shower! Lmao! That was pretty darned hot. Love it when Clois get it on early, gets rid of any of that nasty Clana bizness! Great job! |
tgjluvsbadboys chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Dam girly this rocked off the charts in the all time hot dept.! One thing...haha...you kindof still had Clark still (inside) Lois when they went upstairs! haha! O Jen how'd u miss that? haha! She's gonna b mad! Anyhoo hot fic! Wish I could see the pic that inspired such hotness! Send me the link girly... |
Mrs.ClarkKent chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Woohoo! Is it just me or do we all need a cold shower after that?! Oolala you write some dazzling smutterfluff! I wuvs it! |
jlisa44 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 Dude if this is what ur callin writers block then I say bring it on man! In a word HAWT! |
LoisNClark4Ever chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 Wow. What started off as a slow simmer quickly flamed into a steaming sizzle right before Lois and Clark "burned" up the screen with this hot number! Sorry, I just couldn't resist. And it appears that neither could Clark after he got an eyeful of Lois Lane! *giggles* Seriously, Lana who?! Haha. Okay, let's not ruinl things by going there. What I will say is THANK YOU LuckyCloisFan for inspiring the Goddess with your amazing picture! There's nothing like a little Clois smut to get the muse firing again. As for me, I seriously need a cold shower after catching a fever from this fic. *fans face* Now aside from all the smutty goodness, there were some other great moments that I enjoyed. Like while in the heat of the moment, Clark TRIED to explain his origins to Lois! Haha. I get why he felt compelled to tell her, but seriously?...Also, I just couldn't get enough of his dirty mouth! Lol. It was so much fun to see him let loose in more ways than one. And Lois, she always had the BEST lines! My two favorites here is when she said, "Look who got laid and grew a funny bone" and "We can just throw a load in later after you've finished showing me all the reasons why I'm debating changing your nickname from Smallville to Superman!" *giggles* It was a nice touch, Goddess. It's hard to imagine you having any kind of writer's block after reading this story, but whenever you need a little inspiration please let me know 'cause I have no problem cheering you on! *chuckles* Until next time... :D |