It wasn't quite enough to make me cry or feel sad, but this was a nice attempt at a tragic fic, The quote at the end of your story fits the plot pretty well, but overall, what you lacked was depth. As an author who has written many stories, I believe you know that once a story reaches a certain level of depth, the reader becomes immersed within the plot. With short one-sentenced paragraphs, however, achieving this would be quite difficult unless it's in poetic form.

Also, I would like to note that you've used many cliched phrases. "My tears fell down onto the ground, dampening it" isn't the most original, nor is it very effective. Can you think of more creative ways to illustrate that Jean's crying a lot? To be honest, I'm not too sure about Jean sobbing - he's a tough one and doesn't seem like the type to "dampen the ground" with his waterworks. Tears are fine, but also remember to be aware of the characters' personality!

Good luck with your next fic.