| Reviews for The Lost Primarchs |
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   Bradley Ollerenshaw chapter 1 . 7/12 i guess this is dead huh |
| GreatLakan chapter 21 . 5/18 That was actually a sad, touching story |
| HaggardHobo chapter 65 . 4/26 this story is amazing I can't wait for you to finish it |
| Silver crow chapter 65 . 3/20 Ah just saw the review about Malaysia banning fan fiction well on the off chance that ban is ever lifted and you get your account back and see these reviews I do hope you pick the story up again |
| Guest chapter 65 . 12/4/2019 Dont blame the author. Blame the Malaysian government for banning Fanfiction. |
| Guest chapter 65 . 10/10/2019 Shame this ended so early |
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/8/2019 I forgot about this guy |
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/8/2019 Ahh shit, imma be sad cuz no more chapters |
| ManwithaPlan113 chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Well I’m hooked |
| Silver crow chapter 65 . 9/27/2019 I know the chances of a update after so long are slim but I found this story and read all of it and as much as I enjoyed Hayreddin I enjoyed Thorondors story more and I loved how you built him up as the Primarch that none of the others could claim to have a real issue with and how he got on with both future loyalist and traitor Primarchs The fact he stood out amongst them and received the Eye of Terra was also good But yeah I could go on and on about how much I liked how Thorondor interacted with not only his brothers but also his sons and the regular soldiers of the Imperium I will say one brother I wish he got on with was Magnus I’ve got a bit of a soft spot for him and when Thorondor flinched at his brothers smile back in the celebration the emperor had that got me so yeah would have loved to see the Storm Lord become one of the Cyclopes few true friends Also one thing I found to be a shame is how the fates of the 2nd and 11th Legion didn’t seem intended to be changed would have been great to see how events would have changed with a Primarch like Thorondor around |
| Guest chapter 62 . 8/23/2019 How does Thorodor view Mortarion and Lorgar you didn't mention them here? |
| Luther chapter 57 . 8/22/2019 Really well done your writings, emotional tear are dropping from my eyes, well done friend |
| Van Erik Lucasan chapter 65 . 8/19/2019 Come on dorawarrior! What the hell is with the hold-up? When are you gonna update this Great Masterpiece of Yours?!... This stuff is too good to be left in limbo as it is! |
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/11/2019 Far as I’m concerned, the Eldar have long since past their time as rulers of the galaxy |
| pKmAN chapter 65 . 6/19/2019 very interesting story! |
