Hi! Very nice beginning. Please do continue! Can't wait to see where this goes.

Are you not going to finish this one, either!?

How do we know Freya isn't the Trickster?

I like your idea a lot. I am very curious.
Well written.

Beautiful first chapter for Merthian! Ahhh.
I usually only ship Mergana, but Merthian (and Freylin) works for me.
It's wonderful that you set up Gwen and Mithian early on as friends, since judging from their personalities, I had a feeling that they would get along.
Great writing! Hopefully you didn't abandon this story.

Update soon please

Hey, great to see a new chapter. Enjoying the story - always love to see Merlin have a little happiness in his life. Looking forward to the next update.

Really enjoying this fic! Love the idea of merlin/mithian

Awesome chapter EM! You know I love your Merthian and you have such a beautiful writing style that is a joy to read. This story is fascinating so far and I can't wait to see where it is going with the dark creature lurking about. Hopefully Mithian will find out about his magic was thinking she may have realized how Merlin healed her but not sure about that now ;)

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us :D

Please update soon

That was great. Love it.

Awww.

Great chapter EM! I loved the interactions between Merlin and Mithian and Gwen and the budding feelings are very sweet and you write them so well together. The banter between the three of them was great as well. Thank you for another wonderful chapter

Ooh so cute. I do love a good Merlin/Mithian romance (always thought Merlin deserved a little more love than he was granted in the series).
Looking forward to seeing the blooming love affair?
Sue

This was decent, but really, really fast. Growth is much better in a story. This felt like... meeting, skimming, Mithian has heart flutters, skimming, Merlin acting as if he loves her, skimming, kiss! Other than that, it's alright. :)