Good story! Please update, I want to know what happened to Julchen :(

OMG...Love the story! Update, please!

That was really good! i liked Julchen and how Germany seemed really supportive towards Prussia. It was very good and i think you should totally write more!

Mun : Hello, I came back again. Hmm... I can remember vividly that there's two Fredericks; Frederick I and Frederick II, isnt it? (CMIIW)

And I wonder Jul-chan can be like this, though she was also a Prussian... Keep writing!

The story has much Potential for the chapters to come. I do have a few recommendations for you though on how it could be better.

1. When you say a German word just italicize it and put a small number next to it. At the bottom is the best place to have the translation code.
2. Use your details wisely and not random and scattered.
3. Gilbert was to fast to break into tears and reviled who she was at a rapid rate. Try to slow it down alittle.

I hope to read more of your story soon!

-Twinkys4life

Mun : Hwaaaahh... I am really love Germancest /no/ aaaaannd I am gonna crying while I imagined of them. R ya a German? O.o

F-a-v-e! Let's have fu-un! LOL

So who is Prussia's sister? I can think of several people she might be, but I'd like to hear it from you instead of making wild accusations.
I love how this started, it's so bittersweet (in a good way).
Continue :)
Meg