Reviews for Moving in the Dark
White Magic17 chapter 49 . 4/3
love this! great fic :)
White Magic17 chapter 38 . 4/3
I like how complex you make the struggle with the Leshy and Peter. great fit!
jolinamilainezuckmantel chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
If I could translate your story in German and upload it to a German read page, of course I would write that this is not my story but yours and write a link to the English page. Since I like your story so much and it would be a pity if not more people would read it
IAmKIM chapter 49 . 11/21/2018
Wow! Just wow! Brilliant! You're really a great writer. One of the best. The way you tried your best to give every character a role. Not just a role, but purpose. The build up... Paying respecting to each character. The Beacon Hills Pack! The way you built the leshy. Just everything! Thank you for exploring Cora, the way you did. Ending the story with Scott's POV. Oh! Dear Allison. I thought for a minute there that you'd have Scott Bite her to save her life! I like the way you used Kira to address one of the things that most overlook: What gives the hunters the right to decide ones fate? That hit home. I really enjoyed this story. Had it done in 2 to 3 day. Thank you! For a good read.
thomaseliot chapter 49 . 8/22/2018
This fic is absolutely amazing! It's going straight to 'favourites'. I could list the things I love about it but I'd be here all day. Characterisation of the regulars, interesting OCs, intricate plot, great tension and payoff...all amazing. And I see you've started a sequel! Yaaaay! Thanks so much for writing this.

I'd also be interested in those deleted scenes you mentioned, if they're still available? I'm not on twitter, but I am on tumblr Theostry, and I'm also on a Teen Wolf Discord server if you're interested in joining. :)
cre8tive chapter 1 . 10/23/2017
I absolutely loved your story! It is one of the best that I have read!
Silhouette of a Life chapter 49 . 11/20/2016
I really enjoyed this story. It wa's nice to see a teen wolf story following the season 3 timeline while not following it at all. I hope you continue the story or at least will write another one like it. I was really hoping for the nogitsune to come in to the story at some point. I feel like Stiles got off too easy from dying twice. So having void take him over now in his current predicament with lydia would be quit's interesting. And its weird but i was actually hoping that Kira and Stiles would hook up... to bad. Regardless excellent story you have here, hopefully more will follow :)
Guest chapter 5 . 7/22/2016
STYDIA IS RISING ALREADY IN season 6
hybridwarhawk chapter 49 . 6/3/2016
Goodness what a finale. Scott reaching out to his dad to try and start the process of mending that fence was a surprise but also a good one; seems like maybe that might be better. Too good of an ending it seems, something definitely fishy and I think I know. Hope for the next installment soon.
hybridwarhawk chapter 48 . 6/3/2016
Man what a chapter here. Love the entire fight sequence; from the battle itself to the words that are stated, it was phenomenal. Really liked the bit of Issac and Scott talking about Isaac coming home. Dancing around the cancer assessment of Lydia makes me wonder. Allison, seemingly, coming back winning but also wounded; damn what is happening here?!
hybridwarhawk chapter 47 . 6/3/2016
Really awesome stuff here. Definitely did not see this coming at all with Claudia being a witch and failing to cure herself. Very emotional exchange between mother and son. Stiles making it back ok was a relief but also knowing his mission is also heart wrenching. can't wait for the next part!
hybridwarhawk chapter 45 . 6/3/2016
Really enjoyed getting both sides of the individuals whom are about to go through the ritual. Issac/Allison being a little more comedic in dealing with it while Stiles/Lydia in a more serious nature. Almost seems a little backwards but it fits so amazingly. Having the inevitable with Stiles and Lydia happen now seems very fitting. Great chapter!
hybridwarhawk chapter 44 . 6/3/2016
Loved the attention to detail in regards to Isaac and his arm being gone; bits like that really make this story that more amazing. Also enjoyed the Derek/Sheriff scene as well. Don't see 2 adults have an entire scene too often but this was really on point. Very much enjoyed the dialogue and the advice that Derek gets is really solid too. Amazing work.
hybridwarhawk chapter 43 . 6/3/2016
Really liked the flash back to Isaac and the de-wolfsbanning process. Also enjoyed Scott/Cora have a semi serious talk and Scott's insight on his wolf transformation were great. Definitely forgot that Peter and Lydia had history, might still make some too. Classic Stiles to round out the Chapter as well. Awesome job.
hybridwarhawk chapter 42 . 6/2/2016
Amazing chapter to come down a bit, so to speak. Getting the memory of Scott during his transformation was wonderful. The death of Leshy was written beautifully and almost sad to see him go. Derek/Stiles interaction was great and I enjoy seeing another side of Derek. Great chapter.
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