| Reviews for The Myth of Innocence |
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MMLH.love chapter 18 . 3/12/2015 I absolutely LOVED this story! But I think the ending was too abrupt! It left me wanting more! I hope there's a sequel! |
MMLH.love chapter 11 . 3/12/2015 You're right! This chapter was quite fun to read! |
Darkness.of.the.Day chapter 18 . 11/13/2012 That was amazing, I'm so happy it had a happy ending! |
GoldenFawkes chapter 2 . 1/3/2010 I don't really get it. Is Ginny psychotic? |
Anjelicious chapter 18 . 11/20/2009 That was an awesome story. Keep writing more like these. |
Anjelicious chapter 16 . 11/20/2009 OMG I am in love with this story...Im suposed to be in class right now you know ;D Love Anjel |
Global Conquest-er chapter 18 . 12/14/2008 Ouch. This hurt. The emotions were SO strong - so TRUE . . . It was a GREAT fic, thanks! |
cranberry148 chapter 18 . 3/23/2008 Great story. Nice Job! |
Cadaverous Apples chapter 18 . 12/24/2007 I almost didn't review, but then I thought, what the hell, I love getting reviews, so I know she'd like this. And no, this isn't going to be a negative review. The only reason I didn't want to review is because I hit my elbow when I fell down earlier today and it hurts like a mother. Yeah, so, on to the review. I really liked this story. I liked how you managed to weave a mythical and past bit into it with Adaline and Thom, and I also liked the darker, more insane edge to it. I was hoping for Virginia to come back, and was slightly disappointed in the ending, but that's because I'm a huge closet romantic, so I couldn't help but hope for the happy ending. But, of course, that wouldn't have worked with this story-it's much too dark for a happy ending to suffice. It was because of Virginia that Ginny was managed to be saved, in a way, brought out of the nothing of a life that she lived and able to survive. In a way, it makes much more sense that way, instead of having the true Ginny just rotting away in the back of Virginia's mind. I don't think you could have made the ending turn out any different and had it remain true to the story. This is very beautiful, and I look forward to reading more of your fanfictions. |
daydreamer04 chapter 18 . 6/17/2007 Hmm quite an intresting ending, i was not really expecting that. I really do like this story alot. |
daydreamer04 chapter 9 . 6/17/2007 I am in love with this story as of now. |
K chapter 18 . 4/16/2006 Excellent story. One of the truly powerful stories that is tough to find amidst the mass of mediocrity in fanfiction. Use of multiple well characterized (and not with the standard personalities) actors in the plot, good pacing, and a compelling storyline. I pray you'll continue to write more longer pieces like this one. |
Starry Elf Child chapter 1 . 3/31/2006 *sniff sniff* SO CUTE! |
ibelieveinsnorkacks chapter 18 . 1/30/2006 once again, really great story! i really loved the ending, but i dont really understand why Virginia left too. did the spell they did clear Ginny of all the extra souls besides her own? and how did Adeline get to be in Ginny's body? was Drace actually Thom, just this life's version? ok, anywayz, i think it was really great! (i know i said this b4 for one of your other f.f.'s, but i think you should do a sequel. :P ) keep up the great writing! |
Aelys chapter 18 . 2/26/2005 The whole idea, the concept of having a Ginny and a Virginia in one body, surprised me in the beginning of this fic. But I've really come to appreciate it. It was sad Virginia had to die, but afterall, what better ending could you give? A typical 'miraculous intervention than revises the beloved' would have been... cliché, I think. Nice, but not special. I loved reading this, and loved the way you described the characters and their relationships. It felt real. The extra's, like Hermione and Ron's relationship and the poisons, were complementing. Adding a chapter fully dedicated to Adaline and Thom was risky, you know. Yet I did continue reading, because I loved the way you wrote it, and loved the very idea. Well, all that to say that I absolutely love this fic. |