ch 9 it was very gfood story

Wicked Awesome! Is there a sequel to this story?

Hello,
This chapter seems to be too short and considering chapter 8 ending there were still quite a lot of space and possibilities to write 2 more chapters before reaching the epilogue. For example, adjusting to life in abandoned park, dealing with running out resources, showing bond between Aurora and Big One more and so on. The another fic, The Ranger of Isla Sorna manged, manged to show the aspect of survival with velociraptor so well that even though nothing big happens in the chapter, it's still interesting to read. (Btw I do recommand reading it, it is such a good piece of writing) All in all chapter 9 was underwhelming for me. Don't get me wrong, narration, pacing, characters are good, but I expected more than what I read.

Big One and Aurora? Considering the shower scene involving those two, they have intimate relationship at this moment clearly.

Have a nice day and I'd read your next JW/JP fic gladly.

I can't believe it's over! D:
This story was such a spectacular read. You, my friend, are brilliant. you told a gripping and emotion filled story with a very sweet and satisfying end. I love the thought of Aurora living out in the wild with Big One, and I also like the very imaginative and realistic-way you had her help hunt. A lot of authors would've had their OC running with the raptors and jumping onto herbivores with only a knife in hand in a very unrealistic way. But this was actually really clever and plausible - Good Job!
I hope their is a one-shot or perhaps even a sequel at some point in the future. It's like you said, there's so much potential for a continuation with these characters.
It has been my honour and privilege to be your friend and help you with this wonderful story.

Oh I’m so happy you finished it! You should do a one shot of when Alan comes back to the island to look for Eric (I think that’s his name). That would be cool, to see others reaction to her being one of the pack.

Please continue!

It's been a long time... I thought this story was abandoned with no hope of continuation. I appreciate you decided to finish what you started finally.

Regarding the chapter I didn't notice mistakes or logical plot holes. It was a good chapter. The only thing that made me what was the step forward of Aurora. Did she take a step towards Big One or not. I see he is the last living raptor on the Island, tho there are raptor eggs that Alan found in the Forest in the movie. So I wonder if you those eggs would make a difference in your story. I like the way you portraited Big One, he is still an intelligent animal and he has little or none anthropomotphic traits. Thanks to that there is still some mystery in that charakter and relationship between him and woman will have to be build on trust. However, despite raptor's intelligance, Dr. Wu must have added sth to Big One's DNA therefore the raptor is so interested in Aurora.

I'm looking forward to see the finale of this story and I hope you'll try your strenght in writting Jurassic World fic invoving Owen and Blue or whole Raptor Squad one day, because your writting is pretty good and we need more high quality JW/JP fics.

Have a nice day.

Wow! Good to see you back my friend! I'll admit, I had to reread the previous chapter to remind myself of what had happened but I'm so glad to see that this is back. And what a cliffhanger you've left this on! I can't wit to see more!

so did Hammond see her hiding?

I really wish you finished that final chapter, this story was too good to abandon it where it was with on chapter left. :(

O-o

Also change this chapter all and same thing as the review for the last chapter but remove the hyphens(-) for telling which person says that line of conversation

Dude this is a good story but there is one major error I noticed right off the bat, Change all the apostrophe's(') that highlight as conversation markers and change them to quotation marks(") for conversation markers

Please update

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?