This was hilarious and I loved it!

wish this would happen on the real manga.. anyway, thanks for writing this.. v

I always felt that Himekawa got off too easy...

Excellent story, I really enjoyed it.

This really made my day(Night) The ending made me smile,And as far i could tell it wasn't overly OOC...But.. comfortable. It's nice to read a fic of they're relationship as Friend's once in a while ya' know?

Author-san, You just got another follower/Favorite.

It was awesome. I admit, Oga, with feelings that's not included in the range of violence, sadistic, oblivious and anger, is extremely hard to imagine. When I read how you try to express it, though it was uncomfortable, I don't mind it. It's not OOC. If I was a sap, I'll say it's beautiful. But I'm not. ...I still feel bad for Himekawa. And Furuichi, even with Oga's explaination. How odd right? And haha, Nene such a tsundere.

I love you

Nicely written. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but good overall.

By the way, I think there may be something missing from this sentence: 'The Crest that means his loyalty to Oga and Beel and gives him has one, Kanzaki has one and even Toujou has one.'

Hello !

I like Furuichi with his feelings about the King's Crest. It was funny and painfull too. We can see the relation between him and Oga, the friendship is beautiful. (well, I'm fan of OgaFuru but here it's clear that's friendship)
Himekawa the Pompadour xD ! Why not !
Oga is correct, with some imperfections but I like him like that in this story ) !

Thank you for this OS !
Kiss,
Vagabonde

PS : I'm french so, sorry for my bad english !

This is really sweet. I've got no words to say other than say - you've done a wonderful job showing a brother-kind-of-type relationship between Oga and Furuichi in this manner. Thanks for the good read!

This was really cute! If you feel Oga was OOC it wasn't to a gagging degree -And it's really easy to overstep that boundary.

Such an endearing and weird and touching friendship.

And yes, you made me see the error of Stupi-kawa's ways. He's SOOOOOO dead.

Loved it!

nice look on their reltaionship and showing their FRIENDSHIP, it's really rare with those two here. IF you ever consider writting longer story with beelzebu unlesss it's a yaoi know that you have a follower, good work

Awww... Im a die hard ogafuru fanatic and i just gotta say, you'd make one heck of an ogafuru fluff/romance writer. I thought your characters were in-character pretty well.

Great job! And i hope you write an ogafuru fic soon!