Love this!

sweet story

I read this in puplic and I was trying so hard not to grin and fawn while reading it.
Then I realized I was probably making the creepiest face ever X'D

This story...was amazing! I loved the subtely of it. You just valued the two's emotions so well, put them together, and presented them in such a nice box in this fanfic. Mihashi saying that he was not lonely anymore made me smile too.

Queenie

Simple but lovely. Your writing style has a nice feeling to it. The characters stay very authentic. I like that.

ANTY IHU is this what you call out of practice

i think one of the things i have to really learn from you (because senpai) is to bring out each character's detail within the narrative - show, and not tell. sobs you do this so well, i mean i'm totally clueless about who these people are but the way you build everything up from the very first sentence, to the point where abe starts to have a conversation with mihashi and to the end, i can already picture them as real people. even the shift in abe's character is evident - in such a short piece of writing (ok not /that/ short but dis aint chaptered either) you managed to do all these things while consistently keeping the style of your writing PLS TEACH ME

"Somewhere in the world the ceilings of a cave had fallen down, and it was all because of a crack."
THIS IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVOURITE OH GOD

so many feels for this ugh ;_; this was such a lovely read and pls write more soon xoxo

Aww, Abe, you poor dear. I like your characterization of him, and the fact that it's difficult for him to even recognize his own feelings compared to the bumbling bundle of anxiety that is Mihashi, even though he seems to be the more socially well-adjusted one out of the two of them.