Reviews for Golden Soul
mc-squishy chapter 7 . 5/15
STOP MAKING ME CRY
Guest chapter 8 . 1/1/2018
This is so amazing in every way, love it so incredibly much! Your writing style is so wonderful, so beautifully put! Thanks a lot for sharing it, I'm looking forwards to follow this story a ton and hope you have a really nice night/great day
CelestialLotus chapter 8 . 2/7/2015
I've almost cried several times at these XD Please write another one
Zylina chapter 8 . 2/5/2015
hella cool bro 10/10 good job
SapphireClaw chapter 8 . 2/5/2015
Holy crap. That was poetic and depressing as heck. Great job.
Asuka Rae chapter 8 . 2/5/2015
Dude I just love this WAYY TO MUCH. If you need help with ideas I might be able to help a little
Asuka Rae chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
Please update soon! This series of one shots is SOOOO GOOD! I really want to read more of them as terrible as that sounds, to read about Edward Dying but ITS JUST SO GOOD! Your writing is just SOO GOOD I CANT PUT IT DOWN! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
This almost teased me up. And I never cry. Ever.
Kiichigo-no-Kokoro chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
The line in the first one-shot about Roy telling Elysia happy birthday if Hughes told Ed: most heartbreaking and amazing line I have ever read in a fan fiction! To the point that this is the first review I've ever been compelled to write. You are doing an amazing job, keep up the good work!
Number Eleven is my OC chapter 6 . 12/25/2014
Merry Christmas!
SapphireClaw chapter 6 . 12/25/2014
MERRY FRUCKING CHRISTMAS HERE'S SOME HEARTBREAK FOR YA! Heh, nice Christmas present, really. But sad as heck. Not as sad as your previous chapters, but that's probably a good thing considering that it's christmas. Jolly good chapter! (Not really jolly)
msmazzo chapter 5 . 11/19/2014
...this one I prolly should have not read...no sleep for the next week for me!
msmazzo chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
oh golly...stop the tears...wow...that was seriously sad!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
This is... Just... Too... Much... QAQ

Great now I can't stop crying. TTATT
SapphireClaw chapter 5 . 11/19/2014
It's nice to see an update from you again Sephrina! And boy what a sad update it was. I think what made it even worse was how Roy seemed to be in denial that Edward was dead, convincing himself that Ed was just hurt from the fall. That was horribly heart crushing. Ye.

It's kinda funny, I too wrote a story about Edward being killed by a sniper, except I also wrote an alternate ending where Ed survives so yeah. It's not published on here of course and it probably never will be. It's actually kind of old but I could let you read it if you'd like.
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