Brilliant :)

Where Fred says “I’m not healed like everyone thinks”, it actually says things. But it was a really cute story!

Wow! For your first fanfiction this is very good! Keep it up :D

I love it! It’s a really good story

I love this sooooooooooo much. This is one of my favorite Fremione one shots and I love how realistic Hermione is in this and how I could totally see this happening. Great work!

Well I do love this fanfiction of Hermione/Fred! I am a really great shipper and I definitely ship Fred/Hermione! I didn't see any spelling mistakes but that's probably because I am really tired!
Very good fanfiction! Love it!
xNikkita

Oh my god, this is so beautiful! I loved it!

Very good!

Hi I think the story is great! I found one spelling mistake though it's when Fred says Yeah About that I'm not cured like everyone things that is what it said just wanted to let you know and I think you should make more stories to continue onto this one

It was really good.

I enjoyed every bit of it 3xx

I really love this! The interaction between the two of them is just so real and touching. I love the story

I really, really love it! It has so many feels in it! I love to read Fred x Hermione fanfictions after the war! They always have so many feels in them and this one... omg, i love it! Really good job on this one! i will continue reading your other stories too! Keep writing fred x hermione! 3 :3

Don't worry, it was brilliant for a first fic.
:3

P.S i've read WAY worse :3

That was beautiful! Terrific job! You captured amazing amounts emotion! I hope to be able to read more!