that was fun to read, but really i got pissed off by Riko right now -_-
love your story anyway, can't wait to read more

What what? Are you gonna continue from there? Where is the smut?!
Okay there really is no smut, i checked it's completed and it's T rated. Goddamnit. I got excited when i saw KiyoFuri from you so i didnt pay attention first. Anyway..
I think you handled both of them well! You wouldnt write them too OOC anyway, you're too good for that.
And even if there was a little bit OOC-ness, it wouldnt have showed up because you're too good as a writer for that.
Anyway, i like reading different pairings when they come from YOUR hands. This was no exception.