I enjoyed the story and have come back several times but I have only ever read the entire thing once. It’s lengthy, repetitive at times which makes it difficult to read in one sitting as is suggested as being doable with it being a one shot. It’d read a lot easier and less daunting for new readers if it was broken into 10/15k word chapters. Your ideas and plot is interesting but could do with more refinement. What happened to the Dursley’s in those 8 years? The u-turn with Harry’s attitude to molly Weasley was really nice to read but had no apparent reason other than oh that woman has 8 kids who are alive and loved (if ill mannered).
A bit of work and a lot of love could turn this polish this rough gem. Don’t be afraid to chop and change things, as long as you keep the plot and ideas it will only be better

Oh, hello dear! I rather enjoyed the plot, thanks!
Just a heads up, some things that I've noticed:

It's Perenelle (not Perenial or Perianal)
Wizengamot, Marvolo (sometimes you wrote Mervelo), Nott (not Knott) -that was a funny one to write right now hahaha
Besides, was Harry supposed to find 2 different portraits of his parents, that acted a bit different? (In Godric's and Gringotts) Also, Severus and Lucius found out about him being a Parselmouth twice.

Anyway, thanks again!

I enjoyed this story a whole lot!

Following for if you come back to put it in chapters, I’m not trying this monstrosity

Fix the story put it in chapters not In one MOTHERFUCKING chapter none of the other writers do that fucking idiot

This is better then the first time you wrote but there still a lot of inconsistencies and things that need to be explained more. Overy all this story needs to be edited badly. There have been several times that you have repeated events that have already happened. There have been parts that lack details of what has happened or what is going on. I like the concept of this story. It is very interesting and I love your Harry but the story is hard to fallow. It also feel rushed in some parts and dragging in others. All around the story is inconsistent. It has a lot of potential but as it is right now it's seriously lacking.

the longest one-shot ever

Best one-shot ever

Join the dark side. We have orphanages. ;)

That was Wicked Epicly Awsome!

I Love this story!

It felt really long, because of the lack of chapters. Otherwise it was an amazing story!

Oh my god loved the re-write of this I read your other version and enjoyed it but I love his version much more

The only problem is that in two places it was stated that Harry found his parents portraits.

This was perfect~