Reviews for Sunshine |
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![]() ![]() this was a great story please update soon |
![]() ![]() this is a great story |
![]() ![]() good but to short |
![]() ![]() rey |
![]() ![]() (Clapping)Bravo!Bravo!I'm gonna start reading Moon Beam tomorrow! |
![]() ![]() Hey, I noticed that you keep writing angle instead of angel. I just wanted to point that out to prevent confusion for other readers. I really like this story! |
![]() ![]() YOU TOATALY COPIED SLAPPED!BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
![]() ![]() Slapped thing. Austin adopted the kid. |
![]() ![]() More to the slapped thing they made the girl that saved the kid family. |
![]() ![]() This story is just like "SLAPPED". There is a little kid that got kidnapped by there parent's. A girl that knew the parents saved the little girl. Austin got shot in his shoulder. Ally's in the hospital. The kid got hurt by there parents. Ally has to pretend to be Austins girlfriend. Austin asked ally to marry her and so many more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi I really enjoyed reading your story I was wondering if you could read my story Last chance when you have time if you could I would appreciate it very much thank you |
![]() ![]() this was a great story |
![]() ![]() that was a great them kissing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh this story was perfect! I loved it all so much 33 time to go see if you have any other ones! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol change the texting, I hate that it's in texting form like that lol no one texts Like that anymore and if they really loved eachother (which they do) they'd spell it out. love the story :) |