| Reviews for Book 1 - Nightingale |
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   An Amber Pen chapter 35 . 5/6/2015 Still liking it! Keep writing! |
| An Amber Pen chapter 33 . 8/4/2014 I love this part. It reads SO much better with more spaces. Keep writing! |
| An Amber Pen chapter 32 . 7/29/2014 Mercer's basement was always my favorite spot to loot! I think you should add a lot more spaces between sentences, break up your paragraphs more. It makes the story a little easier to read, ergo more enjoyable. The 'Enter' button is your friend! Keep writing! |
| vvshadowmaiden chapter 32 . 7/27/2014 Author's Note: Sorry it's been so long since I've updated this, but I've been a little preoccupied with, uh, things. And then, because I had put it off for so long, it took a while to find where I was up to and get back into the swing of things. But hopefully, I can keep up a little better now. I have a bunch of stuff due for school in the next few weeks, but after that, things should be quiet enough for me to really get on with this. And also, while I'll continue on with Riviere's story, also expect some Dragon Age fiction in the future, because I may or may not have gotten both DA:O and DA2 just over a month ago and I am more than a little obsessed with that now... Anywho, I just wanted to apologise, and say thanks for your patience :) |
| An Amber Pen chapter 28 . 3/31/2014 Lol yes indeed it will be interesting. Keep writing! |
| An Amber Pen chapter 27 . 3/23/2014 Hehe, I always loved breaking into Riftweald Manor most. So much good stuff! Keep writing! |
| Layla Knowe chapter 26 . 3/17/2014 Great chapter as per usual :-) |
| An Amber Pen chapter 26 . 3/17/2014 They are not going to be happy about what they find in that vault. I knew Brynjolf would be so happy to see her! Hehe! Keep writing! |
| An Amber Pen chapter 25 . 3/11/2014 Yeah, not to mention Mercer probably fed everyone the lie that Karliah killed Riviere. Not exactly the conditions for a warm welcome. |
| Layla Knowe chapter 25 . 3/11/2014 Another wonderful chapter as per usual :-D |
| ThrillSeeker5 chapter 24 . 3/10/2014 Once again, a very good chapter! Hope she makes the jump/ climb! |
| An Amber Pen chapter 24 . 3/5/2014 Still loving it and still wondering what Brynjolf's reaction will be when he finds out she's alive. Keep writing! |
| An Amber Pen chapter 23 . 2/16/2014 I can't wait until she actually can go home to Riften. Brynjolf has to be beside himself with grief. Keep writing! |
| ThrillSeeker5 chapter 23 . 2/16/2014 Strange puzzle box first rubix cube... Intresting, is it not? Anyway, I can't wait to see how the nephew cvomes into this, if at all. Great Chap! |
| Layla Knowe chapter 22 . 2/11/2014 the golden box. stone of barenziah, right? |
