This story really is just SOOOOO much fun.

I really liked this one!

It seemed to have more twists and turns then a Chicago turn-pike. AND, you have shown deep backgrounds never seen before of canon characters. Very well done.

Thank you for sharing it.

I would have liked to seen Shinji given Rei Ayanamia the same type of gift and consideration. I think your quote of her oath of protection almost ... um, demands (?) it. Or at least to be considered.

To be honest, while I have found most of the anime up to the sixth angel, I have never seen any of the later ones, and am not sure I want to. Guess I have grown to admire the characters to much!

Again, thank you for sharing your version.

May the MUSE always be with you!
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That was awesome! Fun, funny, and really sweet. I was initially a little leery of this, but after reading some of your other stuff I decided it was worth a shot. Not as polished as your more recent work, but well executed all the same, with some very enjoyable characterization.

Also, Star Wars reference FTW.

Huh...guess Asuka has one hell of a reason to be nice to Shinji. Until she clues in he somehow paid an exorbitant fee for Grandma Sorhyu's violin, I mean ;P

Stupendous work, if only for Gendo going all Vader in the EVA cage :D

This was pretty good. So eloquently written. I enjoyed how Rei did her best to protect Shinji. Asuka's efforts to uncover the identity of the panty raider were also amusing. The real highlight of the story is the item Shinji purchases. I could not help but wonder what exactly he desired so much that he would resort to stealing panties to obtain. That was certainly a driving force in this story and it kept me reading. What he buys had to be the most perfect gift one could ever hope to receive. I imagine few things could mean as much to Asuka.

Good work.

Awesome! Gendo's part lights up the story a lot, and the ending is really touchy. Shinji let himself into this perverted business for such special things!

Though the reward should be quite small compared with what he did, as long as I realized about the ones involved and Shinji's reaction, I shouldn't talk too much.

excellent work, this is by far the best humorous yet romantic fic i've ever read, the idea is very original, and i especially liked your writing style as you took the time to describe everything

again, this work is masterful, and i hope you write more eva fics :-)

Excellent story. Perfect idea, Perfect plot, Perfect ending. It was close to a masterpiece. Excellent job.

Great story-I could barely read a few paragraphs at a time without laughing! Deception, intrigue, humor, an appeal to "prurient interests", and of course...cool spy gadgets! Perfect ingredients brought together in near perfection. There were a few typos, but your complex sentence structure made the minor mistakes more glaring. Great writing style, though. Also an excellent ending, couldn't have been better. Nice detail on the gift at the end, but disappointing detail on the "packages" ;). Great story ).

this is some fine peice of work you have written. Highly entertaining, defintely worth-while.

a lot of appropiate humour. im sure you ideas were used before but somehow you made them original and took them to another level, may be it was how you written it. the grammar, sentence structure and all were so properly, yet appropiately wriiten, gave it an classy feel. the storyline was well thought out, had twists and all, it was mad.

i didnt like how it ended but the way you wrote it was sweet and i see that you did it intentionally.

keep writing! your work is awesome!

Kinda sweet.

It was awesome! You really should've made a sequel to this, or maybe "boxer raider" starring Rei!

That was excellent. Especially the Gendo scene... "It is your destiny."

Star Wars, much?

"Join me, Shinji. It is your destiny,"

Sounds like something out of Star Wars.

It's funny that you had to include that one line from Gendo in this chapter. It somehow fits his character of being manipulative and cunning, just like in the series. The only difference is that he's interested BOTH in overtaking SEELE AND his professional panty raider, which he now knows is Shinji.

As for Rei's intervention in Asuka's investigation of Shinji's 'nightly escapades', quite a touch there. It seems she is involved with Gendo's schemes as well. Truly mysterious, but that's part of what this story was lacking since her appearance a few chapters back.

The story started with comedy then ended with a serious romance. It sounds like those typical romantic comedies I've watched before, like Love Hina, in my opinion.

Overall, a great story to read, although a long one. It's rare to find these types of stories, which are so long, but still have the essence of a shorter one.

so what's happening is that Gendo is trying to make shinji come to the "dark side" of the panties?