| Reviews for Once Upon Another Time: Book 1 (Discontinued) |
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izhetbean chapter 42 . 3/28/2019 four kids. hooboy they got bizay xD |
mrs Tall Blonde and Dead chapter 42 . 2/26/2019 I don’t get why she’s saying his name in front of people |
oODaniJadeOo chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS SERIES FOR SO LONG, I READ IT YEARS AGO AND LOVED IT BUT LOST IT AND CANNOT EXPRESS MY HAPPINESS AT DISCOVERING IT AGAIN. |
Guest chapter 26 . 12/15/2017 YES YES YES VERY GOOD |
e893931-0 chapter 61 . 4/23/2017 I'm very glad I found this story. Most stories like this are exclusively in New Who. Well done. |
Guest chapter 36 . 8/13/2016 I really like the storyline and plots of this story but Diana is quite a sad excuse for a heroine I've been reading now and have tried to understand why not once she's stood up for herself or taken gets upset about not having her family well do something about it investigate!the doctor anilated hi whole planet but he dosent mope he becomes pro well as that Diana always seeks protection instead of becoming her own person and defending herself or once I would like her to grow tougher skin and not burst into tears every few disappointing because she always waits for others to save her and I believe your portrayal of ace was right and the comments she made about Diana's poor take on life and her own experience(s)I be spot on.I would really like for this to be continued but with Diana beginning to come into her own as a person and her own wasn't share being thrown at your work it was merely a review that I have been meaning to do for se was only constructive criticism please don't take it to heart as I truly believe that this story could be big. |
The professor chapter 4 . 7/15/2016 I am Diana in this chapter. |
YukimuraShuusukeGirl chapter 5 . 6/18/2016 mm no ko no no |
Bonely Skeleton chapter 43 . 6/9/2016 I bet Josephine and Faith are Diana's other daughters. |
Bonely Skeleton chapter 21 . 5/8/2016 That's what I call arguing with yourself. |
deactivatesandwhich chapter 10 . 4/28/2016 You're too hard on yourself, Artemis. |
MayFairy chapter 38 . 3/28/2016 MISSY AND DIANA YESSSS this is so so great I love it |
MayFairy chapter 37 . 3/28/2016 The Sheriff doesn't look that much like the Master, I don't really get where Diana is coming from tbh haha |
MayFairy chapter 36 . 3/28/2016 Jealous Doctor is great but jealous Diana over even the mention of his other interaction with females is kind of annoying not gonna lie, given how proven his devotion is |
MayFairy chapter 35 . 3/27/2016 ROMANA FLIRTING WITH DI YESSS I mean I don't see Romana as a particularly flirty person generally cos of how I headcanon Time Lords to all be on the ace and/or Aro spectrum to some degree, but we'll ignore that haha (plus I ship Doctor/Romana a lot and love the idea of him having to coax her into the idea of romance cos she thinks it's dumb) Also the Valeyard! Totally didn't see that coming, not gonna lie, but it made for a very interesting read for sure. I never know what to think of him. (Romana I was my first serious female crush, even if I wasn't aware of the super gay nature of it at the time, so I totally understand where you're coming from) |