| Reviews for Awakening |
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Blackholelord chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 I want to state that this is the first time, beyond the whole Deadly Hollows, two words from the last story, show any element of being a crossover. |
Taelda chapter 55 . 6/28/2019 I love the poem in this. The imagery is just so powerful. Really good work right there! I also love the way you’ve incorporated it into the story. I spent a while trying to figure out where else it would fit. I thought of a scene with Penny and Tony working on backup Arcs, and she freezes and loses concentration midway which causes something and Tony becomes concerned. But the cooking scene here, really is the best fit. You really are a great writer. I’ve been reading fanfiction for years now. This is one of the few that is in my top 10. Been binge reading this for the last day. Sat up late night and finished Book 1. Really can’t put this down. Really great work! Looking forward to reading more from you! |
MikeMystery chapter 95 . 1/15/2018 Wow, what an explosive end, although it gets kinda tedious reading about Aequivalere's Death so often ;) I really loved the music chapter, was listening to the songs while reaidng the chapter and that was just emotion pure. |
Amber Talamasca chapter 36 . 8/18/2017 Ok. I'm still reading this, and i'm very aware that the rest has already been written. Just wanted to let you know that I'm right in where Tony got his intelligence.. Now that she has the sight, will we heard that tony was Hermione? :) I'll find out in a bit, but just wanted to leave my thoughts here Thanks for an awesome story! |
CelestialPirateQueen chapter 64 . 7/20/2017 *cackles maniacly* I love this. So much. |
CelestialPirateQueen chapter 21 . 7/19/2017 Pepper is officially off Mt TO-KILL List. However Fury, Natasha and Rogers are on the top of it now. Right under Fatty, of course. |
CelestialPirateQueen chapter 20 . 7/19/2017 Fatty, YOU! You.. Oh, I am so going to kill you. |
CelestialPirateQueen chapter 19 . 7/19/2017 Why the hell do you just love to kill her? |
A1c2e31 chapter 48 . 4/29/2017 I didn't catch the Danny Phantom which makes me sad because I used to love that show. I use to unconcisly sing the theme song when I was bored |
Azaira chapter 6 . 10/28/2016 Absolutely amazing story. Definitely one of the best I've read. Although I think you're overdoing it with killing her so much, I can understand that it's literally part of the plot. I just never liked stories where the MC is killed off, so that's more of a personal opinion. |
Azaira chapter 19 . 10/27/2016 You did a great job with everything. It's was nice that you separated the music the way you did; I don't really like reading music in stories, though this was one of the better ones. |
Azaira chapter 18 . 10/27/2016 Have to admit killing her twice is REALLY off putting. If I didn't know you're going to end up bringing her back somehow, like in the first story, I'd probably quit here. |
Thedarklordofsass chapter 73 . 9/29/2016 Well written, but after Pen alerts them to Barton, yiu say that Furies EYES had a glint in them, not eye. |
Guest chapter 83 . 9/25/2016 Hey I was wondering if you could do an extra like with the singing pots and pans and bob the fridge. |
Lahmikhara chapter 95 . 8/11/2016 Woohoo! finally found this again. For some reason I kept loosing this story (-_-). Anyway that was some major curveball in the end and I'm really looking forward to finding out how this is going to play out in the next part. Thanks for the awesome story but I'm going to cut this review short since I must find out what happened to Penny! |