LOVE THIS

Gosh. You probably won't ever see this, but that's okay. Because if it happens that you do, then I'll be glad I ever wrote this review. First off, this story was absolutely amazing. I'm not sure how writers like you even exist, but the plot, ideas, pacing, ending, EVERYTHING was so terrific and created this sort of... harmony. I've read many fanfics that deal with heavy and controversial topics like these, but I must say... they are dull and amateur compared to yours. This is so, so beautiful and I just want you to know that! Now, for the second part- THIS FIC IS LITERALLY THE BANE OF MY EXISTENCE I AM CR Y IN G LIKE! I AM CONFUSED WITH MYSELF? THE ENDING WAS SO GREAT BUT I WANT MO A R IT'S SO PERFECT, BUT I AM SO GREEDY! FOR THE BEAUTY OF THIS MASTERPIECE LEAVES ME DEAD INSIDE I TELL YOU! Aaaand, I'm out. This fic was amazing and beautiful. Please don't ever think otherwise. Also, I might go proceed to cry my heart out as I reread this for the FIFTH time. (It's a classic and timeless masterpiece in my eyes!)

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Hi!

First of all, thank you very much for writing this fanfic.

To be honest, at first I was unsure to read it or not, since 'religious dogmas and stuff' but I'm so glad that I gave it a chance! I was afraid that you would blame God or that sorta thing, but it's just perfect. The message that God loves everyone, regardless of their gender, age, sex, sexuality - nature.

And you know what? I felt horrible while reading because at some point in my life I was just like them. Like their parents. I was told that homosexual 'acts' are sinful. But God made me realize that how could I just say that 2 people who love each other, who care for each other, trust each other with all their might are wrong and bad? Just as you wrote... :3 (Btw I'm heterosexual but I was so confused that if they say God loves everyone how could He hate homosexuals...why aren't they accepted by the church? they are still people, and as you wrote they have feelings, not just instincts and stuff xD...)

It's just so nice to see throughout the whole story that they did not falter in faith, I mean, they trusted God, especially Arthur. (I was so happy to see that Artie started taking his faith seriously and not turn away(after his first heat) - searching for answers, just like I did at that time - and he found his answers - just like me)
Okay, at the end, Alfred said something that he's fed up with trusting some deity, but hey. Who did not experience this? Feeling fed up, feeling that you can't take more. It just makes him more... human, more relatable and not some 'far away' fiction character. :)

That scene, where they went to the church and prayed together! I needed to take a break and just cry. _ So beautiful, so touching, so... good. This fic just purifies this AU. Like seriously. I don't read yaoi themed fics, but I know that there are plenty of porny ones. [well, there was that barn scene... okay, it wasn't my cup of tea - still, I think sex should come after marriage, whatever couples we are talking about. Or if they are sure that they won't split up(and eventually marry)... well, they did not... 'break up'. they were really loyal to each other so it should justify it..(?) ]

I could totally write a whole essay about this fanfic. No kidding. It's beautiful! So right and so wrong at the same time. (bittersweet ending, that's it) I just wanted them to be happy but life isn't that easy: not everyone accepted them in the end.. they will always have those emotional scars which should've been prevented if their parents weren't well... 'blinded my Scripture'.

Sorry if this makes no sense, I'm so emotional right now, I've been crying since the 4th chapter...

God bless you for this fic. You handled these heavy topics so well - depression, finding oneself, parent-children relationships, religion, same sex stuff and so on. There's so much parallel to draw. So much to say.

If this were a book, I would totally buy it!

Hi!

First of all, thank you very much for writing this fanfic.

To be honest, at first I was unsure to read it or not, since 'religious dogmas and stuff' but I'm so glad that I gave it a chance! I was afraid that you would blame God or that sorta thing, but it's just perfect. The message that God loves everyone, regardless of their gender, age, sex, sexuality - nature.

And you know what? I felt horrible while reading because at some point in my life I was just like them. Like their parents. I was told that homosexual 'acts' are sinful. But God made me realize that how could I just say that 2 people who love each other, who care for each other, trust each other with all their might are wrong and bad? Just as you wrote... :3 (Btw I'm heterosexual but I was so confused that if they say God loves everyone then how could He hate homosexuals...why aren't they accepted by the church? they are still people, and as you wrote they have feelings, not just instincts and stuff xD...)

It's just so nice to see throughout the whole story that they did not falter in faith, I mean, they trusted God, especially Arthur. (I was so happy to see that Artie started taking his faith seriously insted of turning away(after his first heat) - searching for answers, just like I did at that time - and he found his answers - just like me)
Okay, at the end, Alfred said something that he's fed up with trusting some deity, but hey. Who did not experience this? Feeling fed up, feeling that you can't take any more. It just makes him more... human, more relatable and not some 'far away' fiction character. :)

That scene, where they went to the church and prayed together! I needed to take a break and just cry. _ So beautiful, so touching, so... good. This fic just purifies this AU. Like seriously. I don't read yaoi themed fics, but I know that there are plenty of porny ones. [well, there was that barn scene... okay, it wasn't my cup of tea - still, I think sex should come after marriage, whatever couples we are talking about. Or if they are sure that they won't split up(and eventually marry)... well, they did not... 'break up'. they were really loyal to each other so it should justify it..(?) ]

I could totally write a whole essay about this fanfic. No kidding. It's beautiful! So right and so wrong at the same time. (bittersweet ending, that's it) I just wanted them to be happy but life isn't that easy: not everyone accepted them in the end.. they will always have those emotional scars which should've been prevented if their parents weren't, well... 'blinded my Scripture'.

Sorry if this makes no sense, I'm so emotional right now, I've been crying since the 4th chapter...

God bless you for this fic. You handled these heavy topics so well - depression, finding oneself, parent-children relationships, religion, same sex stuff and so on. There's so much parallel to draw. So much to say.

If this were a book, I would totally buy it!

DAMMIT, THIS BETTER END HAPPY! Also, it should probably be an M rating. If there are explicit scenes that children under 16 should not read, it should be M.

I don't know if this account is still active, but I just want you to know that the words and the fifth chapter gave me so much comfort and reassurance. It was beautifully written, all of it, but I think that letter is what got to me most. I've always been confused with my own religion... What I believe in, it was hard to come to terms with and really believe in a Heaven or Hell. And if I am to be quite honest, seeing this story made me reflect back on it. It's made me believe more, in a lot more ways than one. I'd like to thank you for the story; it was truly magnificent, awe inspiring really. You saved me much trouble, wether I realize this tomorrow again or even before I meet God. Please continue writing, I'd love to read more stories like this from you.

This was wonderful! You handled the subject of religion delicately, the characters were likable, and the writing was good.

Absolutely amazing. I cried. I'm still crying. Best piece of fanfiction I have ever read, hands down. I love you so much I just want to give you a hug right now.

Words cannot describe how utterly amazing this fic is. Word choice, character development, plot, all of it so realistic yet heartbreaking. Sooooooo happy they got together in the end and I'll admit, first time I read this I cried. One of my favorite USUK fics that I will recommend to many. Keep writing (not necessarily this story but in general) please, please, please!

Quite interesting story... Somehow I am glad that this universe isn't real.

I'm not a particularly religious person, but i very much so enjoyed this story. Probably because i can relate to the characters quite a bit with the whole religious family that refuses to see things outside the "norm" as ok. The character development progressed nicely and was very believable. I would most certainly recommend this story to a friend. Thank you for putting out such a well written story!

This is beautiful. I really happy that they ended up together. Not end in a Shakespearen love story.

Hahaha thats a funny last lines at the end.

Amazing. Simply AMAZING!
I always wanted to read an OmegaxOmega (especially UKUS) fic and found this one and I wasn't disappointed at all: You put a lot of thought into this and it simply feels...realistic, especially with how their feelings are described. I really enjoyed reading this to the point that I read the whole chapter 5 out loud to practice my English.
Simply stunning, loving this dearly! I'm so glad that it ended with a happy end, oh gosh c:
I actually expected to be more reviews here, 'cuz that's a fic I'd read over again in the future.