| Reviews for Hermione and the Tournament |
|---|
Marc the Unruly chapter 1 . 7/15 Whatever you choose to classify it as, it worked. Most enjoyable. :) |
ThirdCabinBoy chapter 1 . 2/1 This is a nice fic, thanks! |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 1/13 Killing with the best sort of kindness you can get. Hermione is a lucky girl, and Harry is lucky she's letting him tie her down to him too. Such a fun little examination of what if. |
ALRYM chapter 1 . 1/12 Hilarious! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2 Gh |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2 Hk |
PurpleArrowhead chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 tsk...tsk...tsk, being a dunderhead malfoy |
madie080802 chapter 1 . 10/27/2019 This was a joy to read, thanks for sharing it, and now its going on my favorites. |
Cyril Kain chapter 1 . 8/14/2019 Nice, but the ending screams 'axed.' BTW, what happened to Ron? Did he just fade into obscurity like the useless git he is? I wanted to at least read about him being arrested for stalking the Cannons/Krum/Hermione. |
Flopple chapter 1 . 7/13/2019 Don’t agree with the bit about Chamberlain, who was trying to save millions of Britons’ lives by avoiding war, but the story was fairly amiable |
BillBrink chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 Warm and funny. Thanks. |
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/6/2019 Good story. |
Bronze chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 You left out whether or not Voldie was truly dead or not. Other then that I really enjoyed it. You pegged Fudge perfectly. The man may be a politician but he's also an absolute moron! He's outlaw gravity if someone paid him enough! As for Fumbles the great and he is exceptionally good at fumbling, you really didn't do anything to him. Seeing as he's Harry Magical Guardian while in school, he had the ability to say Harry can't compete being as he's underage. But as per usual he sat on his bony old ass and did nothing! I wonder what his back up plan was should Harry die in one of the tasks? He certainly hasn't made any attempt to train either Harry or Neville to defeat Tommy-boy. Damn good story though. I like the trick with the Blue Flame though. You know, that could be a damn good secret weapon for Harry to use in another story. Though you'd likely have to make a minor change and have it capable of destroying things as well as pleasing women. Now in a harem fic, boy wouldn't that make him popular! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2018 Well...thankfully this was too serious in a way and too well-written to be a crack-fic; there was way too much smut given that most people already know how sex works or are too young to read about it yet so that part was gratuitous, so I'm going with a too-short straight normal fic that was, other than the excessive smut, a joy to read. I'd have loved a lot more details (not about his penis or her vagina tyvm) about their daily lives and how they figured this or that out, their friends and what they were up to, etc., but in the end, it was well worth the read for the quality writing. |
Bronze chapter 1 . 1/31/2018 Yes it had very nice flow. Though, if you decide to rewrite it, Harry could always demonstrate the blue flames on Dumbledore instead of Hermione. Find out if he still has anything in the tank. Or even Fudge. It seems like Narcissa was the only one in her family with brains. Draco always has the cunning of a rock. He's far more Gryffindor then Slytherin. AS for MoooRon, Merlin only knows where he wound up! Without Hermione to either do his work for him or copy from, I can't see him staying in Hogwarts for more then the next two as he never studies. God only knows what type of job he managed to get! Or did he simply remain with his parents for the rest of their lives? |