| Reviews for Original Sin |
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Laughing Owl Owlery chapter 11 . 4/22 Enjoyed this very much! |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/26/2019 Loved it ! |
kinnik chapter 7 . 10/31/2019 Oh, this could be very bad. They should have waited. |
ib40books chapter 11 . 5/20/2019 Personally, I'd be freaked out if my lover became a snake. Still a good story. |
ib40books chapter 6 . 5/19/2019 Loving how the story's progressing and am throughly enjoying the proverbs. |
Scorpia11 chapter 11 . 5/12/2019 Wonderfully written! The details and dialogue were perfect. Thanks for sharing. |
Sinoritta chapter 11 . 5/12/2019 It was awesome! |
valentina91 chapter 11 . 5/6/2019 Spoilers Ahead, finished story review Ok, this story is going straight into my top 10 of all times. 11 chapter is not too long so I could read it in one go, but it is enough to develop an interesting plot, and boy is this good. I loved the suspense and the investigation and I am very satisfied with the solution of the riddle. Also, my compliments for the characters, the are fully canon-complaint in their main traits but they also fit perfectly in the setting you created. In particular, I loved Draco's impatience for being with Hermione and his intelligence, and I loved Hermione's passion and her trying to follow the rules but being faced with her impulsive and free spirit. The shag was hot, but the serpent scene at the end was really moving. You portrayed an intimacy that goes beyond the mere sex act. It was beautiful to read. |
InLoveWithDraco13 chapter 11 . 2/7/2019 Wonderful story! Thank you so much for the read! x M. |
InLoveWithDraco13 chapter 7 . 2/7/2019 AmAZING! So, so great! I haven't stopped to review because I have been reading this brilliance as fast as humanly possible. Please forgive. I LOVE this story! x M. |
vickety chapter 11 . 1/3/2019 Thanks! This was great. |
DeathDagger chapter 11 . 11/8/2018 I knew he was that type, didn’t expect the other thing though...should’ve with the blonde hair...Great story! |
melyusop chapter 11 . 11/2/2018 I really enjoyed this! Thank you. |
PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 11 . 7/13/2018 wonderful idea for a story! i love unique plots! picking the Albino King Cobra for the Animagus form of D was brilliant! love it! |
AnnaOxford chapter 3 . 5/3/2018 Well, Astoria was in the characters thingy so I guess she did play some kind of role in this! |