I'm sorry to say it bro but while your story has potential your Shepard is a freaking asshole way too cocky. If you toned him down and made him seem like less of a douchebag your story would rock.

I saw that halo reference also good chapter but I don't remember seeing blasters or plasma grenades is mass effect I know it's fanfiction but I saw no mention of these weapons in the earlier chapters

Hope you well and really enjoying your story

I was mainly thinking of leaving this going for a chapter or two to see where it goes in my head and if I don't like it or if enough people don't like it then I won't continue it anymore :D

I got to say no to the star wars crossover, sorry. Referencing fine, but an actual into the universe crossover, no, it is simply too imbalanced.

awesome story can't wait for chapter 5

No offense bud, but this is a crossover now, so you may need to change some story details. Good luck!

Really good.

I like the alternating POV between Tali and Shepard. Always nice to see what the other characters are thinking and feeling instead of only Shepard.

Good to hear that you slow the romance down. Let them develop their feelings first. Let them know each other better, before the relationship starts- But please let the romance start in ME1.

Do Reyes and O'Malley will play a bigger role in your story? They seem pretty interesting, especially O'Malley with his Torfan background.

Keep up the good work.

Phil

Has potential, odd way for it to start, and so soon

A bit fast paced here and there, but overall a really promising start.

You said it yourself, there can't be enough Tali x MShep stories, so i would love to see you continue this story.

Phil

Very good.

Not bad. Would love to see more.