GREETINGS, INFIDEL! I recognize that Jeff Dunham line anywhere!

I realized that I hate how the Biju are treated. If I was Naruto, yes I'd be scared but I would try to understand why Kurama is so mad all the time. And you have Naruto disrespecting Kurama when Kurama is just talking to him. Also I hope your Naruto doesn't end up like canon Naruto where he is as weak as he was when he left for the training trip. In canon he didn't learn any new jutsu, just variations of the rasengan. This was probably my biggest pet peeve when it comes to canon Naruto.

Heck no if this was supposed to be a harem u should of added Sakura or an uzumaki that he found and rescued or found a female Uchiha in the hideout so he could fall for her and be with both tayuya and naruto

Did she just hit him because she doesn't know how reverse summoning works? I swear, this type of shit makes me dislike Naruto stories.

You did a good job

Thank you

over all great story and your grammar and articulation is good to but just pointing out the fat that sasuke didnt tear naruto apart they were practically dead even the only reason naruto was more damaged is because of the chidori he got to the lung naruto smacked sasuke around just as mutch and before sasukes sharingan evolved to the third stage he couldnt even follow narutos movments and then when it did evolve and he started gaining the upper hand naruto pulled out the version one shroud and smacked sasuke around again until he pulled out the level 2 curse mark so by no means did sasuke tear naruto apart sasuke one because nauto didnt want to kill him and by the skin off his teeth at that

por que você parou essa é bem melhor.

great story so far

Tayuya is amazing with naruto i know it

Oh my god! Please use a spell check application!

This is comedy gold here, why did you ever stop this story?

I have to say i prefer "the blue-eyed fox" over "seeing red". But both stories are great. There is too little NarutoXTayuya on this site.

Noooooooooo! Don't let something you seen on The show change the Story! It was getting good please Continue!

i love this story.
it's very goof besides that i don't read the manga from naruto or watch the anime to end.
but now at the latest chapter it's not getting continued.
that's sad because i wanted to know how it's going between naruto and tayuya and what the council was chose or think -.-
and what the summoned fox from tayuya wanted from naruto

can you please write it to end and clear this questions?
i know that you write on an rewrite from this story