hola bro vas a continuar la historia

that koi shit makes him sound very feminine.. Usually its hime or tenshi.. this story is old as shit so I don't even know if you will see this author-san.

I find abit irritating when people put things in like "oh kyu will help" or whatever your fiction is based on a Japanese show so literally you are having Naruto "9 will help"
I feel that people who are meant to be elite forward thinking leaders would be able to easily work out who they are referring to it would've been better to use his name as who else is going to know the kyuubi has a name

please update this it's a great story

Sweet chapter I like it so far but Naruto seriously got beat that easily by Sakura is stupid and ridiculous especially with the training he did.

I like that test story.

Her Name Is Hana Not Hanna Like Come On This Is Was Okay At First But I Can’t Read This Anymore It’s Too Irritating Like Proofreading Is Easy For Fixing Mistakes But I Guess People Are Too Lazy Or I’m Just A Perfectionist Either Way I’m Out

Needs A Serious Grammar And Spelling Error Clean Up Incredibly Irritating And Hard To Continue Reading Considering This Is A Decent Story

I know this is old but damn I really wanna see how this goes!

its a shame this is dead

I thought she didn't like being called hime

"Whoa whoa," Kiba said, "you beat my sister?" He looked puzzled "how you're the freaking dead last in class!"

I don't know, Kiba, how did the dead last become a kage level ninja in the spam of three years(to include beating the leader of the akatski, saving the kazakage, and stopping a war in three days) while the Rookie of the Year was placed on the elamental nations most wanted list(to include betraying konaha, joining orochimaru and the akatsuki, attempting to kidnap killer bee, pick a fight with four out of five kage(I will never acknowledge danzo as a kage) and killing danzo) and the in that same amount of time? How did the top female(not spelling that out) ninja became the most shit in konaha's history while every other female improved greatly?

LMFAO! I was not expecting that. Asuma's death was entirely too anticlimatic- and the clarification of his death. LMAO, it's too good. Love the story, thanks for the laughs. I needed that

This heat thing seems a little weird, does it just last one day? if it's a week-ish that's ridiculous. They'd effectively need to hide 1/4 of the time. Or is it only if they're tracked down?

Also, Kage Bunshin is an A-Rank Kinjutsu. Kinjutsu means 'forbidden technique'. Kenjutsu, what you said, is sword techniques

Hahahahahaha. The way Tsume is scolding Kiba, remind me of my own mom xD