Reviews for The Fatherless
Sebastian12345 chapter 7 . 4/17
please write a continuation
tmntlover2013 chapter 7 . 8/1/2019
Great job on the story, please update as soon as you can thanks.
inuyasha16451 chapter 7 . 5/8/2018
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon.
flowerlover12 chapter 7 . 5/30/2017
It had a sad ending. Is there going to be a sequel? I hope so. Its a very good story but I want to know what happens with itachi and deidara and Sasuke and Naruto.
Shiona Acitiu chapter 7 . 4/4/2017
This chapter just breaks my heart. Especially the end of it. Update sooooon.
DoubleDuece chapter 7 . 9/12/2016
I dont know if still going to write more chapters for this story, but i would really love to see some more n_n
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 5 . 8/28/2016
I really hope that naru finds someone who is willing to take care of him and the baby I mean sasuke is such a bitch he is enjoying his life without naruto and he dares to say he misses him how hypocrite can he be when after that he said he is better without him ugh I hope he reacts to this when it's too late and it would have been so fucking awesome if he ended up with itachi if deidara wasn't there damn you dei but I guess it's OK but really please let naru be happy with somebody else and make sasuke burn with jealousy but just when it's too late stupid teme and that witch of din also can go and die poor itachi hopefully they will find out that she is a living little bitch just like sasuke please update its been years since you have done it so please
janicewalcott chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
Good story so far. But I have to admit, I feel more sorry for Sasuke, than I do for Naruto. Actually, I don't feel sorry for Naruto.
1. They're both still TEENAGERS.
2. They both work at crappy jobs that hardly substantiate their bills. And so what if they're from rich families. It's mega selfish, immature and irresponsible to take on the burdens you willfully create for yourself. 3. They never discussed having kids with each other. And obviously if they did Naruto would probably think twice about buying that pill.
4. The fact that they'd been together all of 6 years and are now just getting it that they want completely different things, just makes it downright obvious that their relationship was really just based on convenience, mutual attraction, and a fair amount of attachment. Not love.
5. Sasuke is now being pushed into taking up the most extreme responsibility a human being could ever undertake. So of course it's messing with his head; but of course, he's being painted as the asshole. 6. NOBODY forced or even suggested that Naruto buy that pill, and he never gave Sasuke the chance to say, 'ya know what, let's use a condom tonight just in case that pill actually works.' Naruto didn't consider Sasuke's feelings or the huge potential consequences, and now he's all like, 'whoa is me, my boyfriend doesn't want our baby.'
Don't get me wrong. I'm not a Sasuke fan (and in fact prefer Naruto, while Itachi is my all time favourite), it just annoys me to no end when people do stuff without weighing the consequences and then blame/burden others.
And yes, I know this is just a fanfiction story. And a good one...so far.
Ellen Silva chapter 7 . 2/3/2016
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rokudaime09 chapter 7 . 9/27/2015
This is good wish you would continue wanna know what will happen next!
uzuzu chapter 7 . 5/30/2015
Oh shit im crying!...argghhhhh...
ShadesofStrange chapter 7 . 1/29/2015
This fic is really good
Guest chapter 2 . 7/26/2014
Dude stop using words that aren't necessary yes cool you know some big words but it just feels forced.
YaoiHimeSama chapter 7 . 7/16/2014
Oh no! Please update soon Author-San!.
Rei chapter 7 . 6/11/2014
I liked this chapter mostly for the ItaDei moments but I'm so sad they lost their child and a bit mad that Itachi wasn't there for Dei. I hope they can patch things together, I really do enjoy them together.
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