Thank you SO MUCH for not making Lisanna a fricking JeRk. I mean she's not my favorite character but there is to much hate

Me: hello there! Great story! My full name is Lillian Vermillion Strauss! The story has lots of potential!

Ok I don't usually care about typos but you made one absolutely hilarious XD "as Romeo shit his fire at the man." I assume you mean shot. That made me snort that was so funny omg XD

I'm liking the plot so far but I will have to say the grammar and spelling is pretty poor. If you look over it I'm sure you'll see what I mean. But so far I'm enjoying the actual story, characters are really in character too so well done!

I really like your idea but I think you need to work on our grammar.
good story tho :)

its not done yet, right?
pleasee.?

What happens next?!

Please update soon, I need to know what happens.
This is really good.

Noo the bad guy are stupied
But I love this story!
silver

*gasp* seriously? updates! im gonna wait. :3