I'd like to know what happens next please update

I know it has been awhile

Are you still gonna rewrite this? I'm curious to see the story!

I really like this and the plot is good to. I just finish the beyblade sires again and please. I wish to try again it was very good.

I wish I'd found this sooner! THIS IS AMAZING! Please keep updating. I'm not sure if you will cuz it's been a while (I think) since you've last updated but still, I just want to say amazing job and keep writing.

That Poor Cat
Tsubassa shame on you shame on you

Whatda Heck Tsubassa

Please, continue, you got me hooked! Re-write or do whatever you like, but continue. (No need for re-writing, I liked this just the way it is.)
Stars in the sky at noon had good ideas, I can only add a thougt of something that maybe could help him out of the darkness again. What could it be, when/how would he (or somebody else) notice it, etc.

Oh, noooooo! Don't give up! I really love this new take on Tsubasa and the dark power! You just need a direction, right?
Just ask yourself: In what direction will the dark power take Tsubasa? What is he going to use it for? Like you said, you need a direction. Is he going to be like some kind of hunter, now, preying on all his unsuspecting friends? Or will the power be used for his personal gain in getting stronger, simply, than his friends? Will he be acting behind-the-scenes? Alone? They're tricky decisions, I know, but the options are vast and limitless. You just haven't decided what you want him to do with this.
I am very determined to keep this story going for you, because I really like it!

Noooo, don't do that! I think your idea and your writing style is brilliant, so please don't give up on me now!
We all have times when we feel a little off about what we write. It's part of the job. But I seriously think that you're awesome! Keep going, because we love you!
-Shay x
PS: chapter 3 was awesome -

NO!
Is you are, do it soon!
PLEASE?!

Interesting... I quite like this take on Tsubasa and the 'darkness'.

This is interesting... I've been playing with the idea of the darkness coming back, but as something unwanted. This is different to anything I've read.

The fact that he's in a dark room starts us off well. It indicates he's already starting to fall... And as we go through the prologue, he falls further and further down into the darkness...

This bit, "How hopeless. How absurdly sad.

Here he was, laughing at nothing and longing for the same darkness that made his friends give him suspicious worried looks for weeks" (I may have got that slightly wrong), is very intriguing. Why would he want something that made his friends cautious of him? It's also the way you started that off...

Very good for a prologue, and update soon!