WOW! Just WOW! This is one of the best and most complex AU backstory I've ever read about Bill Cipher!
I have come across quite a few stories where Bill was once a human who somehow turned into a demon, but none of them describe it in such detail.
I like the plot where he and the triangular demon became one and the same. It adds a sort of tragic twist that really goes well with the ending with his former friends.
You have managed to interlock tragedy with a spice of horror to make a fanfic so very unique that I don't have words for it.
You dialogue is also spot on. I'll be the first to admit that dialogue is definitely NOT my forte.
Your characterization of Bill as a human was very good and I am pleased to note, it wasn't cheesy like I'm used to reading in other stories.
PLEASE do keep writing. Talent like yours is what makes the website great.

This was one of the first fanfics I ever read, and I'm SO grateful it was. It was before I had an account and I refound this and OH MY GOD I FORGOT HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS STORY. I love this story. You made me care so much about these characters and it killed me to watch them fall. This will forever be one of my favorite fan fics.

cool loved it well done

cool

poor girl

poor Ricky

uh oh

Payback's a bitch Agus, also is he dies does that mean that His father get remarried?

wow dark

Gus you traitorous little ass

love it

the gnomes are most likely going to die now lol

uh no don't do that Gus

interesting very interesting

very interesting and he is getting closer to the Bill we know with every chapter now