I've enjoyed reading this fic, even if it isn't tat long yet. I look forward to what comes next.

Will this story continue, or is it dead?

I don't really like cursing and other adult content in stories based on things mostly made for kids unless it's something crazy like a Frank Miller inspiration. I only made my Sly Cooper Rated T because I figured it would be like any DC animated show, I suppose.

Would've liked seeing the Guardians get the capsule, but this works alright.

Good, id like to see more chapters! :)

Aww, man ! It was good. I wanted to see more !

Interesting premise, here. Not much about Zero has really changed, but here, he has a chance to know what's really going on in Arcadia. There's so much more potential for Zero here, so much more that his action will affect. I'm starting to feel that it was BAD for Ciel to wake Zero up in the canon story.

Wonderful work as always. I really do love how you've fleshed out (so to speak) the Guardians in this story. Seeing Harpuia of all people going along with the playfulness of the others in the first chapter threw me for a loop at first, but the more I thought about it the more I liked it, because it makes it less of a rigid characterization and yeah people do act differently depending on the situation and who they're with.

Zero, as I've mentioned on several of your fics, is fantastically written, and here is no exception. To go with the above, all of your characters noticeably read more "real" to me than in many fics, although I can't put my finger on exactly how you pull that off. Zero especially I always get a flash of "yes that makes /total sense/".
Sorry, I'm going to try and not gush too much about it.

Anyway, I'm very much looking forward to the meeting with Ciel; and how Zero interprets the Resistance compared to what he's been told this chapter. I imagine it's not going to be an instant switch, but I can't wait to see how it goes and how it influences the Guardians. I don't know if you're going beyond the first game, but a united front of Guardians and Resistance against Weil? That would be something interesting.

Good luck and keep it up!

Characters are fleshed out decently can't wait to read more :)

YOU BASTARD THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME

I can't wait to see Zero's heel-face-turn when he finds out that the mighty Resistance leader is a mere human child. His moral compass will throw Neo Arcadia for a loop, that's for sure.

Oh gosh, it's ironic that you don;t consider yourself a particularly good writer when you're a far superior writer then so many others here. You should be proud of your ability! I feel a bit ashamed of knowing next to nothing about the Zero games and am yet furiously reading a bunch of stories based on them (I just started Zero 1 and I'm enjoying it, but Aztec Falcon's wrecking my shit). I can't say much about the Guardians being in character, but from your stories with Zero and Ciel, I'm sure you have no problem with that.

I wonder if zero will realize who is the really evil

good luck just what will happen with omega

I am an idiot. Or blind. How I overlooked your name when I last reviewed I don't know.

Which - yay! - means I know this story is going to be written well. Always exciting to see more work from you.

PLEASE CONTINUE!