The plot was beautiful and I loved the ending!

Wow. No words. No words can even come close. Where do I even begin? You had me hooked since chapter 1! And somehow I read the story in its entirety in ONE SITTING! That's how amazing this story is!

Your characters were so well-written and within character, and even...just your portrayal of them as marine creatures and their reactions and suffering in marine parks is purely amazing. I don't think I can ever look at captive animals the same way ever again without imagining them as these merfolks. The middle of the story really got to me as Haru and Makoto started losing their minds in captivity and Rin started feeling helpless without anyone...it made me cry!

Truly, one of the best I've ever read. I hope that you've kept up the great work with all your future writing.

Nice story! Your portrayal of them as animals was very well done. And its actually complete

Oh the part were the writer tries cheap shot to get a reaction. Good shes dead theres too much focus on the sharks

Ive never even seen this anime and Im enjoying this story :)

I was wondering if Nagisa and Rei saw Rin doing flips too. Like how would they react seeing a shark doing flips with a pod of orca and a dolphin?
Anyways! I really liked this story. I don't usually read Free! Fanfics but made an exception for this one and dont regret it at all! If I could LIKE, LOVE or FAVORITE this or something, I totally would. Unfortunately I can only leave this long review that you probably won't even read til the end.
Sorry about the length but I'm done now! Good job and keep writing cuz it's (& you too) amazing!

AAAAHHH! XD I love this story SO MUCH! I just so beautiful! :D Great story! Loved it!

My heart is exploding with happiness right now! Your writing is beautiful!

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE!

Hooooollllyyy shhiiiiyyytttt this was frickin gorgeous, i love it so much! It made my heart hurt in a good way 333 ESPECIALLY "Ai back me up." "I think Rin is very good at flips." LMAO Ai so cuuute

"How about kira?" Me: bitch he dosnet have a death note...

That was actually the cutest fucking fanfiction ever thank you for making me smile
Of course there was plenty of angst but pft being depressed is great too

I just wanted to say this story was amazing, and the rei x Nagisa was so good and the makAto and haruka was amazing and everything was great and I don't leave reviews often because they are me feel awkward and I'm shy, but this was too good.

This was absolutely amazing! I wish I had the words to describe how much I love this story, or how absolutely talented you are! This fic had me feeling so many different emotions, It takes a true author to be able to do that to a person :) And the way all their indivual stories interlaced with each other was awesome! Thank you so much for writing this, good job! Xoxo

That was really adoreable!