These are so great and I know to not be drinking and reading since if I have liquid in my mouth during about a third of this, it would have been sprayed on my laptop. Great balance of humor, danger and h/c. 3

I might not have popcorn but I do have some Reese's and now a wide grin. I think this is my fav 'reveal' so far, mostly cause Sherlock was able to savor it and all three could enjoy together the expression on his face as he started putting it together.

A terrific story!

Oh, wow, pulling at our heartstrings right from the beginning! I loved Ian as a child, but somehow I think I actually like him MORE as a teenager! (How on earth did that happen? Lol!) It's especially fun to see Ian bonding with Sherlock and even teaming up with him against John's self-depreciation! Another great story, and another must read!

There's a mention by John where he would like to have met Sherlock when he was younger in school. I wondered if you would plan on a heritage series surrounding this premise, as that could be an interesting avenue to explore

Sherlock's thought process revealed so much about his background. I wonder how much of his behavior derives from his parents and not just his amazing brain. Ian's glare was awesome. I really enjoyed all the superhero comments and the reaction of learning he is "that John Watson"

Haha, Mycroft was hilarious in this chapter, its fun to see him when he doesn't know what's going on :) Sherlock and his rivalry never gets old with their banter

I love how John, his son, and his dad can all surprise Sherlock and catch him off guard, great family trait. I enjoyed your portrayal of John's father, nice character development there. The stuff about Mycroft was great too.

I adored Sherlock's talk with Ian, so heartfelt and true and in character too.

The phone line was great haha

I really enjoyed the perspective on how John and Sherlock view Ian tagging along. John is a great dad

I love how Sherlock interacts with Ian, John's put down of Sally was great too. I like your twist of how Ian and John avoided the court case

Great ending line lol

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