OMG OMG OMG THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST TWILIGHT FAN FICTIONS I HAVE EVR READ! (i am using caps bcuase its tue, i didnt like have caps lock or anything.

Oh wow! That was such a sweet ending! I literally cried at this! I just loved reading this story so much and hope you write another story like it but focusing on the kids now that would be really great :). Jake/Ness are having another baby aww so cute! Would like to read it some day.
I just love Masen and Siena, they're really cute together.

Glad there's a happy ending in this story. I loved it!

I just hate Riley Biers with every fiber in my being. I depise him with a passion :/ anyway. Good chapter, it was action packed to lol. I'm so glad Renesmee is staying strong in the state she's in, Jane is still my number one Bitch. Brenden seems too creepy for me hehe. Can't imagine how Bella and Edward must be feeling hey. I liked it a lot MRC ;) awesome work!

Oh god oh no! Okay first off...I know it's a little late lol where I am I can't keep my eyes shut, it's hard to sleep for some reason anyway I was literally biting my nails in this chapter wondering what will happen next. I can't imagine how Jacob is feeling right now, with his imprint missing and him taking care of 5 kids! Wow! Glad the Cullens are being supportive hey, interesting to see the father/son bond with Masen and Jacob, now that was cute!
Jacob is going through a lot I just hope everything gets better at the end.
Renesmee's POV really scared me a little though haha loved it!

Oh my god! No poor Renesmee! That is just too cruel of those guys ugh! I liked this chapter a lot. Sarahbelle and Marie are just too cute btw. Can't wait to see what happens next on the next chapter

Awww the ending was awesome :) Siena and Masen have their own home now! And Nessie's pregnant again! Yay! I loved it Alex, it was a nice story. I think you did a really good job on it and it's been a great journey reading this story in a way. Also thanks for the shoutout :)

I'm lying in the dark right nos and waited for the epilogue, and aww such a cute ending! I was waiting for CJ to phase and he did, he's so grown up now :'P love that the Blacks are also close with Siena' family! And aww Ness is pregnant again :') even though she has so many children, i feel like Masen, Elizabeth and CJ are already grown up idk so i feel happy for her and Jacob. You're right it's common that epilogues are set years after so i like what you did! It was an awesome story Alex! Short but sweet ;)

This chapter was great! Take care of you first and we will be here when you get back.

Oh my gosh, I love this fanfiction, I just began reading shattered and I think I have to start with Renesmee's Childhood first...anyway I loved the first chapter Alex and the Galaxy kids are really awesome! :)Love it

Awww glad she is home again! Cracked up when she swore on a non existing child haha :') and the action scene was good, though i understand what you mean. I don't usually read them cause once i hate when i have to look out for so many events who are happening in a action scene so i mostly skip them. Anyway great chapter glad you updated it!

This wad a great chapter and the fighting scene was pretty good,! Ofcourse we understand :) youre ubder alot of stress right now and fanfiction can get in,the way espeacially when,people bug you for more frequent updates :) ohh by the way im,your biggest fan :)

Loved it! I just reading this fanfic and I positively loved it! I don't really know what else to say...3

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Awww Renesmee's home. I thought the action scene was good. Anyway, I loved it and I can't wait for the epilogue. Great job :)

Aww poor Jake. Awww I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work :)

Ohh poor Jake :( he seems like a different person now but i dont blame him. And it feels like Elizabeth is responsibile for everything meanwhile masen has fun with siena. I hope they saved her now :) great chapter!