| Reviews for The Last Spartan |
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   typersnyder chapter 21 . 12h Please update! |
| Callum Runchman chapter 21 . 7/29 Such a shame you had to leave this account and story unfinished. I was so looking forward to seeing Artemis's reaction to their kiss at the end and what else would have happened during the rest of the war |
| sArIsNu chapter 2 . 7/16 Please, i beg you to edit this. Father/Farther Father-parent Farther- comparative adverb for far |
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/25 It's, uh, still up? |
| Llama gamer dude chapter 3 . 5/12 You're taking so long to get to the point, just hurry up all ready, your just dragging ur story out, Jesus Christ! |
| CatLuver chapter 2 . 5/12 Ya spelt Odyseus wrong, lol~ |
| AwesomeWriter chapter 6 . 3/17 yo, u have sooooo many writing errors. Like, im assuming ur in high school. but u still dont know how to spell father or definitely. Like, a countless amount of times, it says farther instead of father, and as for definitely, u just. spammed the f button, it literally says deffinantly. How stupid can u get, maybe handover the idea to a better writer, and leave fanfiction forever, cuz u. suck, |
| PercivalTheImpulsive chapter 21 . 1/24 Hey I absolutely love this story and I was wondering if you could PM me your new pen name? I couldn’t find a way to PM you so I had to go this way. Great story btw had me staying up all night reading it. |
| NAME chapter 13 . 1/4 I don't have friends they disappoint me. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4 Type your review for this chapter here... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2019 It sucks that Percy has such terrible scars, if that hadn’t been added the story would of been amazing. Just this got me immediately disinterested. He’s a warrior I know. Fantastic writing and story though. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/6/2019 Oh come on! Get a sword and chop those bullies into shit! |
| The Great Aadi chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 this is a truly beautiful prologue and I request you to complete this story. |
| Jack golden chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 Don’t care for your name just care for your book |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/14/2019 Wow the inner demons personality and monologue were as disappointing and bland as expected. |
