Really liking the story plot but it feels a little rushed. The relationship between Valkyrie and Skulduggery could be a lot slower so that you can develop their characters more, but all in all I really enjoyed your fic.

Yay!

Dude they've known each other for like a couple days and he's talkin about marriage?
Also I like the story and everything but Valkyrie is very out of character here. She's more timid and gentle in this fic wheres in the book she's strong willed and loves hitting people. Its the same with skulduggery but I can understand that since he's a really hard character to try and write about. But all and all the actual story is really good. I just wanted to say that ;-;

What's happening? What's her plan! I'm anxious here people this is nerve racking!

I'm so sorry I'm sure he/she was a great person.

OMFG! I KNOW WHATS WRONG DUDE AND IM GOING CRAZY HERE!

I LOVE this, really don't get me wrong it's just the chapters are very short. It's a great story I am in love with it just can you please make the chapters a tad bit longer? Thank you!
Dexter
P.S Your an amazing writer

This is Freakin awesome! You rock!

This is genius! You are an amazing writer and the idea for Skulduggery to be human again was sheer brilliance. The other romances between them are hard to read as it is kind of hard to kiss a skeleton.

Sorry no mean to be rude or anything but yeah u got the description and characters ALL wrong

This chapter is a bit rushed, but is still really good

aww man! XD Don't worry I'll find it

nooooooo! valkyrie! love the babys name! are you going to use melissa?

naaaaw! cutesy chapter! i love these ones the best of all!

sorry for your loss :(