I really hope you are still writing this story. I am really into your second, as much as the first! Please continue it!

Thanks-
Stevie Marie

Omg thank you thank you thank you! For updating. Uh so who was the person all tied up that Zarbon showed bulma? Man I feel so bad for Vegeta :'( poor guy. Damn im scared for what's gonna happen to bulma. I wish bulma would telepathically speak to Vegeta just so he get a sense of relief. So whats gonna happen next? I hope bulma contacts Vegeta with escape plan. Please update again! Lol

P.S. I cant believe im actually digging the zarbon and freeza moments like chapter 5 and the others b4 that, keep them coming :-)

Well I see Ruxin got what he deserved. Wonder why none of the others that was going along with didn't help him? Too scared to be killed also. Damn Bulma's a ruthless woman on a mission. Update again soon

Ok WTF is the deal with Ruxin? I hope that Prime gets Bulma's dad and all of them get off Frieza's ship but that would be too easy. What's gonna happen to Vegeta now? Update again soon

OMG! Bulma is sooo stupid sometimes but I guess if that was my father then I'd do what I could to save him also. I just wonder what is gonna happen now, Can't wait for more.

uh oh. wonder what Frieza wants? and Vegeta you better be nice to Bulma or you might loose her. Can't wait for more.

I like it.
Keep up with it :)

Please udate soon!

I absolutely love the last story and I will cant wait till the next chapter

looks very interesting can't wait for more