I don't know, but I just found the last passage pretty hilarious. This is one amusingly nice story.

I love the ShikaTem

lol like i said before it's always the quiet one slap hinata hissing at her boyfriend naruto don't you dare finish that sentence besides I know that you love it when i am loud at night

OMG those ninjutsu on bed.. Jiraiya the legend one of this

Omg
I just can’t even... this was AMAZING! Can you pleaaaaaaaase do more NaruHinas? You’re so good at working with their personalities. Like you have bent their personalities a little to add the lust and stuff but you can still get the Naruto and Hinata we all love!
Even tho I am not a big fan of SasuSaku, I still read through it just to get to the NaruHina part! It was beyond of what I expected! I loved it. Wish there was more

This story was absolutely hilariously great and dammit if only Jiraiya’s book was real lmao xD

How... odd.. ya know what, I LIKE IT!

ouch...i feel very bad for hinata

This. Is. Amazing! I've never thought of ninjutsu being used in the bedroom before. Also naruhina sure is full of surprise.

this was hilarious to read! i loved seeing all the naruto girls discuss about such a wild and interesting topic. the ninjutsu that you used were very creative and fun, and it was interesting how it could be used for intimaticy. the smut was well written, and the characters weren’t OOC. i loved it!

i'm usually not into smut but that was AMAZING and unique.

Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story.

I'm gonna be honest, I have mixed feelings on kink. Certain things like roleplay and bondage make sense to me, even as a Christian.
Be that as it may, I am still opinionated. Anal sex just strikes me as disgusting. Orgies, threesomes, and the likes thereof make me uncomfortable. But candle wax? Seriously? I'm not knocking anybody's kinks, but things like that just leave me scratching my head and thinking, 'What the Hell?' I may not believe in evolution, but it's pretty hypocritical to say that we evolved from apes and then promote weird crap like this. Because primates don't use sex toys. When they mate, they do it like every other non-human mammal: the old-fashioned way.
As for what you said at the top, Mr. Armageddon Angel, I would have to disagree. Granted, erections that are too long make sex uncomfortable (if not impossible), but there are lots of women who are actually into hardcore sex. To be fair, I don't know this from experience, but it's not exactly feasible that hardcore sex is fictional. After all, how would EVERYBODY come up with and agree with the same idea regardless of gender?
So, the only truly negative thing I have to say is in response to your second introduction point: "STFU. You sound like a condescending know-it-all."

Oh man, that's too perfect. I mean, why else would the Uzumaki family have ended up with two little future protagonists instead of just one like everyone else? ;)

Plus, I agree about NaruHina. SasuSaku is intense and passionate and dramatic, but...NaruHina is something special. They bring out the best in each other, more than any other couple. She's a sunflower, and he's sunshine, and they absolutely bask in each other's presence, and it's lovely.

Kinky.