Your a bitch in every sense of the word. Do you think this is how the story would’ve gone? Or are you looking to make an oc. If so say it in the summary of your story dumbass. No one likes cunts who look for fame in any absurd way.

I busted out laughing at a bunch of moments you probably didn't intend for us to. Kabuto is kind of... bottom tier st*pid? For example, the first one was when the old man asked the very clever and leading question of "A pleasure to meet you, Mr...?" and this was Kabuto's response "Well played. I'll have to play along for now". I mean seriously, you've managed to turn being asked for your name into a complicated and clever power move.

But it's certainly not a rare occurrence, these "st*pid moments". Anything from one look conveying 20 different emotions, being able to read Veteran into some dude standing there watching, becoming astonished because someone pointed out the school that literally dominated his eyesight from the moment he appeared(How could it not, and how could he have not noticed beforehand? Seems kind of obvious.) and etc, etc, etc.

I have to either laugh at the stupidity of it and treat this like a Parody/humor fic or drop the story each time those little moments come up. I chose the former so this is 100% a story about an edgier Sloth... From Ice Age or the Goonies. It doesn't matter which lol

Ugh. Shitty. Fanfiction is known for its less than disable stories. Seriously. Kabuto. What do you take him for. Burning chakra resisting a contract like that? You havnt thought anything through at all. I'm considering you an idiot if anything. Consider this a flaming rather than an eye opener. Well. A dumbass is harder to work with than an idiot.

I liked the chapter!

I really like this story and it's quite well written except for your habit to spell peasant like the bird pheasant but still great story

nope, not reading this shit anymore, you're super nerfing kabuto, fuck that.

buen capitulo-good chapter

amatsuretsu? how? itachi corpse?

scary helmet!

smart helmet

man, so emotional, i dont do emotional

nice!

How cute, a mouse attacking a cobra.

Interesting story, looking forward to reading more

I have 2 questions.
1. Will Kabuto ever use the reanimation jutsu?
2. Will he become sage Kabuto?