Why the Fuuuuuck is he writing a letter to Garrow 'explaining' that he is Eragon's father... when he isn't!?

Have you also forgotten that Harry is just disguised as Brom. And has apparently been disguised for years. For no real reason either since Brom had never been to the village anyway so... WHY THE FUCK IS HARRY EVEN PRETENDING TO BE BROM IN THE FIRST PLACE? literally the first person who asks him who he is in the ancient language will know.

Ugh, this is just so dumb and fucked. Not to mention you somehow manipulated the time stamps to make it look like you wrote this story all recently. We can all see reviews from 2013 dumbass.

Dropped, what a shit show this is.

Woah Woah Woah. He's also stealing Brom's name? That with the mannerisms etc actually really creeps me out tbh. Why doesn't he go by Harry or literally anyone else? Is he planning to fool all of Brom's old friends too? Then why call himself Brom in the first place.
Uhh, that's just kinda sick to me.

This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue

Ok, am I the only one thinking that Luna managed to become Immortal as well?

Brilliant cross-over one of the best I've read so far are there any plans to finish this?

are you still alive to continue this story?

Harry's grand speeches are getting old. He seems to do it to everyone he meets. Meets Murtagh outside the cafeteria? Give him a speech about accepting yourself, ignoring the sheep and having good friends. Who cares that the kid barely knows you? Murtagh barely gets a sentence in between Harry's preaching, then Harrys ends it by claiming it was a good talk. Then of course there's all the speeches he gives Arya.

Also for someone thousands of years old he likes to reminisce about a specific 7 years right near the start of his existence an abnormal amount. Like he didn't have any learning experiences since then? I don't care how 'defining' that time of his life was, after a couple thousand years it would cease being as important.

horrible writing and your insistant need to follow canon is just rediculous

My favorite thing about FanFiction is that you guys write these giant stories, abandon them, and then lie about it.

"I'm definitely back guys, totally writing again! Promise!" - Liar from three years ago.

You all do this. What's the point of wasting all of your time and then just bailing? There's always some shit excuse about a rewrite, or someone dying or losing notes(It's the 21st, this is always a lie).

I enjoyed the story until I noticed it wasn't complete lol

Harry is making really dumb decisions. He’s also making people suffer and leaving people to suffer. This makes him an evil asshole. His excuses are beyond pathetic and don’t really make sense. This story is not going well for what it’s supposed to be. Leaving the elf in prison cements Harry as an evil dick. No excuse is legit to leave her hanging in chains. Cold heartless monster.

This harry is supposed to be thousands of years old? No way. He’s retarded.

Please update this story, it is too good to not be finished.

Are you going to finish this story it is amazing I have really enjoyed reading it and hope you can finish this

I have to say no. Just no. You forced way too many things in this chapter just to get your basic concept across that it makes it entirely unbelievable. This coupled with the (albeit minor) grammar errors as well as the overall choppy dialogue just makes it feel uncomfortable and unruly when someone tries to read it.

For now, I'll give the next chapter a try; however, if it does not start to improve in the next few chapters I shall stop reading this completely.