Um more...pls

OMG this is so good I can't wait

This is amazing and so well crafted! This is just a to die for timetravel fic like I love it soo much! Everything just fits together into the perfect plot, with all the right twists that leave me on the edge of my proverbial seat. I just love your characterization and the bonds you've formed and display between the characters!

Thank you for the super lovely piece of work!

Interesting story so far. Definitely looking forward to see what happens next!

That's an unusual time travel story but I really like it. Can't wait to read more!

Damn it can't Luffy track little him with Haki?
Keep on the writes

Please update soon please give us more!

good fanfic. if anyone adopts them, let me know via a message? I would love to read any continuations...

Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesssssssss!

Better barely rushed than painfully dragged.

*Rayleigh & Shakky

this story is so amazingly written. I like your writing style so very much. I cried when I read the dream ace had! There are a lot of grammar and typing mistakes throughout the story. and it would be a lot better with a simple re-check. but still, this story is AWESOME!

well, the story was interesting, so good job with what you did write.
suggestion: add "up for adoption" to either the title or summary so people don't start reading this story thinking it's still going like I did.

I loved the story, i'm sad to see it end..

And you have a wonderful life as well